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Homepage › Stories › I Will Love You Forever

I Will Love You Forever

Summary

Andy's voice was so angelic! And his perfect face just made me want to melt. I had liked Black Veil Brides for a long time! I looked up after head banging to see Andy staring at me in a very odd way... The way you stare at someone when you like them. I didn't think he was looking at me when I looked over and saw a really pretty girl standing next to me. Well I guess I'd have to ask when I went backstage after the show.

Characters

Andy Biersack

Andy Biersack

The frontman of Black Veil Brides and Lexi's amazing boyfriend.

Ashley Purdy

Ashley Purdy

The bass player for the band Black Veil Brides and the boyfriend of Vannah.

Christian "CC" Coma

Christian "CC" Coma

The drum player for Black Veil Brides and a friend of Andy, Ashley, Jake, Jinxx, Vannah, and Lexi.

Jake Pitts

Jake Pitts

A guitarist for Black Veil Brides and friends with Andy, Ashley, Jinxx, CC, Lexi, and Vannah.

Jeremy "Jinxx" Ferguson

Jeremy "Jinxx" Ferguson

A guitarist, pianist, and violinist, for Black Veil Brides. He's also friends with Andy, Ashley, Jake, CC, Lexi, and Vannah.

Lexi Victoria Holmes

Lexi Victoria Holmes

Andy Biersack's girlfriend and Vannah's best friend.

Vannah Rose Jones

Vannah Rose Jones

Ashley Purdy's amazing girlfriend.

Chapters

  1. The Concert

  2. I Did Not See This Coming

    Andy likes me?! I didn't see this coming...

  3. I Love You Lexi

    Andy picked me up and stared into my eyes. "I love you Lexi Victoria Holmes." And we just stood there like that until he kissed me.

  4. He Found Out

    He found my scars from burns and blades...

  5. Baby It'll Be Okay

    He really loves me...

  6. We're Moving Too Fast

  7. It's Not Too Fast Now

  8. Moonlit Dinner

  9. I Love You

Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15
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