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I Will Love You Forever

I Did Not See This Coming

"Yeah I'd love to know why I'm on a stage with five of the most important people in my life..." I said with hesitance. "I just wanted to inform you that you caught my eye. You have the most amazing hair, beautiful eyes, and you're not afraid to be yourself and wear what you want. I've never seen a fan of BVB wear a shirt with Batman riding a rainbow, a copy of my Prophet jacket, and a Sailor Moon necklace," Andy replied shyly. "Well I just like wearing random merch. I would have put on my BVB shirt but I wore that to the last concett!" With that Andy started laughing and the he asked, "Did you bring any friends today?" "Yes I did her name is Vannah!" "Okay then. Vannah come up here please." Vannah came up to me and Andy said, "Hello Vannah! Is there anything you want to say?" Vannah smiled, laughed, and took the mic, "Last month I decided to go shopping with Lexi and she took me to get a tattoo that I've been wanting for a while. After I got that I got a bunch of band merch. She paid for it because she loves me." At that she pointed out her Ashley Purdy shirt, Purdy Approves pin, and tattoo on her forearm that has all the band members names on it. Ashley looked at her like he was a teenage boy crushing in a girl during class. I giggled and she looked back then walked toward him. He whispered something into her ear and she nodded and almost started crying.

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Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15