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I Will Love You Forever

I Love You Lexi

At the end of the show Andy took me behind the stage and Ashley did the same with Vannah. I walked to her and I asked why she screamed and just about cried. She said, "My hero, Ashley Purdy just asked me out!!" I hugged her and she hugged me back. Then Ashley walked behind Vannah and kissed her on the cheek the same time Andy came up and kissed my cheek. Vannah and I had jackets on (mine a copy of Andy's and Vannah's a copy of Ashley's) so we decided to take them off. Ashley walked up to Vannah and grabbed her wrist gently. She slightly winced and he looked at her concerned. She frowned, looked down, and blushed. Ashley picked her arm up and looked at her wrists then said, "Babe, what made you do this?" She looked at him ashamed then started crying. Ashley wrapped his arms around her and kissed her neck slowly making his way to her lips. I turned away and slightly frowned. Then Andy walked up and grabbed my hips. I jumped and looked at him confused. He looked at me and said, "Lexi, I knew that this was going to be hard but um... Will you go out with me?" He was so awkward and adorable! I said yes and he kissed me slowly. I told him we'd finish that later.

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Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15