I Will Love You Forever - Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

Please make another one like this

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)