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I Will Love You Forever

Baby It'll Be Okay

After I told him why I cut he pulled up to his lap and held me to his chest like a small child. He pecked my cheek and then I sat up. I told him I was going tiger a drink. I found Ashley putting away various bottles of liquor and one two liter of coke. All of the sudden he looked at the counter and said, "Dammit! I forgot the Jack. I got vodka, moonshine, and beer. But no Jack. Tell Vannah and Andy I'll be back in about twenty minutes." I got a glass out and got water then went into the main room again. Andy was on the bed watching Batman again and Vannah was still on her laptop. "Ashley is going to. be back in about twenty minutes he forgot the Jack," I said. "Well that gives me time to take a shower and get relaxed," Vannah said. She got her stuff ready and got in the shower. Ashley walked in a about five minutes after Vannah got into the shower. Ashley asked where Vannah was and I said she went downstairs to get a candy bar. He said, "Okay. On that note I'll be in the bathroom." Ashley walked into the bathroom to hear Vannah singing "Hello Kitty" by Avril Lavigne. He joined in. She screamed and he laughed. All I heard after that was splashing, kissing, and laughing. Ashley and Vannah came out fully bathed and laughing. I then looked at Andy and he raised his eyebrow. I nodded my head and we got into the shower. He kept his boxers on and I put on a bathing suit. I got in and he looked at my stomach. He saw the words I had engraved into my skin. "Why do you have these ones?" I replied, "In high school everyone called me a low life, a faggot, a fat bitch, and a whore." He then got down on his knees and kissed each of my scars gently. When he made it tri my chest he stopped and asked, "Are you ready for this?" I looked at him and nodded. He kissed me up to my mouth and then we made out for five minutes in the shower or however long until Ashley charged in and ripped open the shower curtains. "Oohhh. We have a little love going on in here huh," he asked. Vannah walked in then walked back out and dragged Ashley with her. Andy got me out and dried me and kissed me.

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Hope you guys like it!! :D (<^^)

Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15