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I Will Love You Forever

Moonlit Dinner

Andy and I had just finished watching the movie and we were walking to a restaurant. He turned to me and said, "I have something to tell you when we get to the restaurant." I smiled at him and then looked down at my outfit. I was in my black ripped skinny jeans, Mötley Crüe shirt, black Converses, and had two wrists covered in bracelets. "I should've dressed in something nicer," I said. "No you look beautiful Lexi," he replied. After he said that he picked me up and carried me to the restaurant. He was so strong but didn't look it. He amazed me in so many ways. We finally got to the restaurant. He sat me in a chair and kissed my forehead. A waiter came over and handed us our menus. I ordered some sort of steak and Andy ordered the same thing. We finished our dinner and he ordered a piece of chocolate cake to share. While we were waiting he took me outside. He looked me in the eyes and said, "I know you've been through a lot of hard times so you think when men use these words they're using you but I.... I think I'm in love with you." I was in shock. I was just staring at him. He pursed his lips and said sorry. He went to walk into the restaurant again but I stopped him. "Andy, I love you," I whispered.

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Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15