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I Will Love You Forever

It's Not Too Fast Now

I dragged my self out of the shower to hear Vannah talking to I think Ashley I hear her giggle....weird she doesn't giggle eh whatever I pick up my phone whoa! How long have I been in the shower?! I get dressed and did my hair and my makeup and walk out of the room to see Vannah and Ashley curled up together on a bed she has mascara running down her face, she seems to be sleeping Ashley sleeping too....okay? I text Andy
Me: Hey Andy what's going on why are Ashley and Vanna sleeping and where is every one?
Andy: Oh hey you're out of the shower! Our show got canceled because of weather and Vannah's dad came and called her a stupid whore and she was lucky that he tracked her cellphone...
Then he tried to take her and let's just say Ashley did not agree with that. And meet me out side in like two minutes!
Me: Okay....

I put on my black converse and rushed down the stairs.
I see Andy in a suit he walks up to me "I hope this isn't rushing any thing but would you like to go to the movies with me then enjoy a moon lit diner?"
Stunned I managed to choke out, "Of...course..."

Notes

Comments

@Purdy_Girl_1
I will but going to add more suspension and I won't rush everything.

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/26/15

Please make another one like this

Purdy_Girl_1 Purdy_Girl_1
4/11/15

@BVBfangirlqueen
Thank you! I thought everything was moving a little fast too. I will try to improve that in my next story. XD

bvbarmyforlife bvbarmyforlife
4/10/15

A little more description and suspense would be nice too. And maybe some more dramatic wording? :) Just suggestions. This is a really good idea and I like how it cautions people about internet-dating being dangerous.

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15

I don't want to make this criticism I just want to add some 'constructive' with this comment because you have a really good idea here. My only problem with it was that it was a little... naive... for lack of a better word. The dialect and some of the actions were too fast and a little too fluffy to be realistic. I think you just need to get the swing of things ad you'll be a top-notch writer. :)

BVBfangirlqueen BVBfangirlqueen
4/10/15