Andy - Comments, page 2

I really liked this chapter! The underwater breathing part is one of the coolest things to visualize

Ooh, can't wait to see what hapens in the next chapter! I'm honestly loving these new updates, and I am finding myself to be checking everyday if you've posted. It gives me a lot of joy to read your wonderful book! :)

Sigh! A little bit of fluff before the storm, huh?
:)

Lonesome Ol Jerome, by Anathema. One of the first fanfics I ever read; set the bar very high. Anathema has a way of writing Andy that's very relatable and sweet.
Night Watch, by Anathema. Based off the fanfic the main character in LOJ is writing. Completely different from most others as it's high fantasy.
The Cost of Winning, by RedPhoenix77. Ashley-centric writer who stays true to his public persona while making him a relatable character.
Limbo, by RedPhoenix77. A bit like this story, many supernatural elements.
A Demon's Regret, by Smutty Pariah. Andy as a lust demon. Very irreverent, you have been warned.
A Demon's Bargain, by Smutty Pariah. ADR's evil twin :)
I separated SP and Ana because they're arch-rivals!
That should keep you busy for a while lol.

Awesome Chapter :)

@Whiny Emo Batman
Thanks!!! That's awesome to hear, I appreciate it and I am glad that you've been enjoying it!

Fun chapter... I like it! :) This might sound corny, but this fanfic has helped me chill out and given me something to look forward to these last few weeks, when thesis work and classes have been difficult. Looking forward to more!

i love this chapter so much! Can't wait for more :)

Hmmm... Why do I get the feeling that the poop is gonna hit the fan next chapter?
:)

It must have been hard for Andy to hear that, i hope he will be okay

I'm loving how just when I think I know most things about Andy, someone or something else from his past pops up and adds another dimension to everything.

I second Mezzy18's comment - poor kids. Jeez, is anything going to go right? :)

Awww, I feel sorry for both Asheen and Andy. Poor munchkins :(

Ok, cool, but what's going on with the Outlaw? Somethin' ain't right, to quote my Gramma...
:)

I'm literally obsessed with reading this book haha. My mind is constantly on what's to happen in the new update whenever i finish a chapter.

Interesting chapter, and wow, WAY cool art! I'd love to see any more pieces you've made for the story! :)

@Whiny Emo Batman
Thanks! I appreciate it and I'm glad that you're enjoying the story! And I love reading your comments!

I'm sorry you had to go through that, and I appreciate you sharing it with me. :) I'm glad that Ash is coming off towards the topic correctly! Thank you for your continued support of the story. :)

Great chapter! I really love the way you're portraying the story in these newer chapters.

I second that, and all I can add is excellent chapter! Andy is going to get to the bottom of the whole mystery and everything will suddenly be sunshine and rainbows... right?
:)

I'm liking these new chapters a lot! No kidding, I get super excited every time I see an update now!

Also, I don't think the self-harm aspect came off as disrespectful (this coming from a former self-harmer). Ash's attitude toward it is typical of someone who is not a self-harmer, and I think her inner struggle was accurately portrayed. She's clearly not doing it because of emotional pain, and so naturally she'd be hesitant to hurt herself.