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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Pins & Needles, Polar the Dog

We were a sweaty sex-mess. It was awesome. I’m not sure how long it was before Andy eventually got up on one elbow, shakily, and pulled out, then fell back over from the effort with a grunt.

Eventually, I realized I was losing feeling in my leg, and I called out weakly, “Andy…?”

“Mmm, yeah babe?” He had a shit-eating grin that was contagious.

“You have to stop sexing me, we have stuff to do.” He rolled off me and tossed the condom, then curled up next to me.

“I had you to do. Besides, you were long overdue for some sexin’. Unless, of course, you’re saying that you didn’t enjoy that too, hmm, Dr. Hageman?” And he shot me his devilish little smirk.

“I definitely did, you anus!” I laughed “I don’t usually let anyone go down on me, but you talked me into it somehow. I guess you’re just very, uh, persuasive.” Still smirking, so smug! Ugh, he’s irresistible! I went to sit up to kiss him, but he met me on the way and I melted back onto the bed. Heavenly…

“Can we shower again before making calls? I don’t want any awkwardness if Juliet wants to-“

“-Oh god, no, of course, of course! Yeah, let’s go shower! Like, right now!” Oh jeez, I hadn’t even thought about that. What if she facetimed Andy or something? Fucking modern technology! I leapt out of bed, almost face-planting on my partially asleep leg in my fear of hurting Juliet’s feelings. “Motherdicklord!” I had stubbed a toe. Fucking shit.

“Easy there, killer. No one’s calling right now.” Andy chuckled and came after me to the bathroom, and we showered, again, laughing and just being silly.

Notes

so: i wrote this chapter really fast because i needed an excuse to post about a friend of mine. in essence, she has a dog that needs emergency dental surgery. she works at a veterinary clinic, but her discount hasn't kicked in yet. she's one of my best friends, she has beaten a heroin and crack addiction, survived a brutal assault, and come out on top of it all. she is a rocker chick and now has four special needs dogs. it's possible i might be planning for a fictionalized version of her to make an appearance in the sequel to this story, should i write one, *maybes* ;)

if you want to help, or if you are willing to share the link: Here's the link to help Polar, one of her dogs, with emergency dental surgery

QOTD: have you ever had to ask for help with emergency veterinary expenses? have you ever heard of carecredit?

note: i haven't actually graduated yet, so i can't help my friend out myself. i know, very frustrating. :(

Comments

*NOTE* The author of this story no longer has access to her account due to site malfunction.
SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17