Login with:

Facebook
Twitter
Tumblr
Google
Yahoo
Aol.
Mibba

Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.

Homepage › Stories › The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome › Chapter 82

The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

A/N

There is 24 hours left to help make a difference here

so this is not a chapter. Sorry, I'm working on one but it's not done yet. Look, I'm not a big humanitarian. I fucking hate most of humanity for what they have done to the earth, and the way they often treat their animals and each other.

But I still feel like sometimes opportunities present themselves to make a difference. Osteogenesis imperfecta is a terrible disease where the bones are not as resilient as they should be. Anyone with it is, by default, a courageous motherfucker until proven otherwise. And frankly, I have been pretty irritated that the bvb army has only stepped up to raise, like, 2 grand, despite repeated tweets by Andy. What the fuck!?!

i mean, I am in, like, hundreds of thousands of dollars of debt. If I can give a few bucks, so can every person reading this, and every person who read about it on Andy's Twitter. If everyone gave $1, that kid could have his van. The bvb army talks a lot of talk about supporting each other- I challenge you to put your fucking money where your mouth is!

Notes

*steps off podium*

(don't worry- incoming smut soonish)

Comments

*NOTE* The author of this story no longer has access to her account due to site malfunction.
SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17
View all comments