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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Discombobulated, pouting Andy vs. the secret slinking of women

*Gwyn’s POV*

As soon as the curtain swung shut, Andy turned to me and smiled, and I felt my beat-up, old heart flutter. I smiled back, but looked away shyly. I mean, it felt right, but after so little time, this seemed insane. I really hoped Andy didn’t go on to regret it. I started to imagine the backlash from his fans and his press and my mood went a little sour.

“Hey, you ok, Doc?” Andy gently touched my cheek, looking concerned. I realized I had been scowling. I felt bad- I had a very intense scowl, he probably thought I was planning a homicide from the look on my face.

“I’ll be alright. I was just wondering if, maybe, you could put off telling people about us for a while?” Instantly I regretted not having been more specific, Andy looked incredibly hurt.

“Um… I… why?” I felt terrible, he clearly thought I was ashamed of him.

“No, no, Andy, I am so glad to be your partner!” I kissed him, and I put my feelings into it. I kissed him until he chuckled and smiled.

“Ok, I believe you. So what’s the problem?” He reached down and pinched my nipple, his grin growing wider and that left eyebrow shooting up. I gave his hand a little smack- we were in a hospital!

“We haven’t known each other very long, Andy. I don’t care if you tell the people you know personally, that’s fine. But if you could hold off on any, like, Twittering about it, or talking about it in interviews, or official announcements, for just a while longer, I’d feel better about it. I feel like I’d get a lot less hate. Please, Hot-shot?”

In response, Andy pouted. As in, full-on, lower lip came out a bit, he had a slight frown that alternated with a sad face, and he crossed his arms. “You fucking women, always wanting to slink around secretly, it drives me nuts! I hate that, I fucking hate that!” He turned to look at me, running a hand through his hair. “How long? A year, what?” He wrinkled his nose in irritation.

Poor Andy looked so cute, all discombobulated. I laughed, which caught him off guard. He looked confused, and up went that eyebrow. “A fucking year? Are you shitting me?”

He scowled again. “No. I just took a guess from past experience. Hmph.” He kind of stuck his nose in the air and fussed with his hair more. Oops. Sensitive topic.

“I was thinking, more like, a week and a half?” I reached for his hand, with a cautious smile.

He turned, surprised, and took my hand. “Oh. Well, I’ll think about it.” He smiled and kissed my cheek. “We’ll see if I can make it that long.”

Notes

QOTD: favorite comic book character superhero/antihero (not villain- that’s a different question, for later!).

Probably Neil Gaiman’s Dream (the Sandman), though I love Wolverine (X-Men), Batman, Tank Girl, Rorschach (Watchmen), Johnny the Homicidal Maniac, and Marv (Sin City) especially.

Comments

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17