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Suffer In Silence

You're a Soldier Now, Fighting in a Battle

*Sandra’s POV*

“She’s been ignoring me all week, I knew it would happen, but I guess I still hoped she’d be able to look past it and know I’m just trying to help” I admit, my voice catching at the end. “Sandy, you did the right thing, she can’t see it right now because all her brain is letting her focus on is the betrayal she feels. Right now, this is just another person who has broken her trust, but it will pass, she’s a sensible girl” Jinxx says in a soothing voice, though it does little to actually sooth me. Still, I appreciate his unwillingness to lie. “Look, we have to put our own feelings aside for now, what’s important is coming up with details for the plan so that Koda doesn’t get the backlash if it backfires” Andy says, breaking the long silence. “It was a big promise, how are we going to fulfil it?” Jake muses, deep in concentration. Another long silence breaks out, each of us trying to think of an idea.

*Jinxx’s POV*

“Ok, so to re-cap, the plan is to follow them carefully, CC’s van should be ready by then, and wait for maximum one minute once they have entered the hotel room. Once the minute -or less, if need be- is up, we knock on the door, when that bastard answers, Sandra -dressed as a maid- busies him by talking in jumbled spanglish and gibberish so he is too confused to notice Max and I creeping into the room. Once inside, Max will set up hidden cameras he ‘borrowed’ from his dads shop -since he’s the tech ‘expert’ of our group and yes, Andy, he’s one of us now, Koda loves him, but as a friend, so no jealousy, you know she loves you-.”

“Anyway, from there. once Sandra leaves in an ‘annoyed’ rush, and he closes the door we, having hidden ourselves as well, will wait for him to start trying to rape Koda. We will have our texts to the rest of you ready to send, Sandra will have changed and once she receives the text, will rush to the security and report a major domestic disturbance so they will intervene. Koda will put up the fight of her life to prevent him from penetrating her until the security arrives. If they don’t get there in time, we will intervene. Andy, I know you don’t like being kept out of the room, but we both know you wouldn’t be able to control yourself, Koda will need you to comfort her afterwoods.”

“Ash, you can’t go in either because you would hold the guy down for Andy to beat him to death, the last thing any of us needs is to lose you two. And finally, CC will be waiting -with Jake to keep him from getting too antsy- in the van ready to drive us away at a moments notice in case this gets ugly.” Finally I stop and take in big, slow breaths, I was talking so fast that I barely breathed at all. I sigh with relief. We had been arguing for hours over the details.

“Everyone keep your phones charged and on you at all times, this could go down any day now, oh and we need to find a back-up car in case it happens before CC’s car is out of the shop. I’ll be spending the day tomorrow with Koda, she says she has a surprise for me, so we at least have tomorrow to prepare. After the surprise I’ll ease her into the plan and try to get her to forgive you Sandy, if she doesn’t listen to me -‘cos let’s face it she’s just as stubborn as I am- I’ll get Max to talk to her, she always listens to him” Andy pipes up, clearly trying not to seem annoyed when he says the part about Max.

Notes

I'M SO SORRY ABOUT HOW LONG THIS TOOK!.

With all the shit that's been going on it's been hard enough to wright without having major writers block as well. By last weekend I finally had the rough draft done and, thanks to a mino physical altercation my sister and I had with my dad, I gathered the motivation to finish the final draft but was too mentaly exhausted to type it up as well so yo had to wait 'till now. I'm sorry it's so short, hopefully the next chapter will be longer.

I hope you guys like this chapter, what do you think the surprise will be? let me know in the comments :)

Ch. Title Credit: Bryan Adams - Sound the Bugle (you may recognise it from Spirit: Stallion of thr Cimmaron)

p.s. Just before my kitten tried to get out again (I've been keeping her in at nights, she's actually 7 or more months old but is still the size of a 4-5 month old) so I jumped up to stop her, my dog poopy, a small cavalier king charles spaniel x pugalier, had been in my lap so she was jossled out and suddenly, my puppy, a 5-ish month old staffy x sharpei jumped poopy, she didn't hurt her but I've seen actual dog fights before and this was definantly not friendly, what alarms me most is she is so much bigger than poopy and it was completely unprovoked, they have had other little altercations like this over bones and food and it scares the hell out of me. They love eachother, are always playing and sometimes keeping eachother warm on the couch, so I really hope they get over this, if the puppy doesn't eventually stop this, or she starts actually injuring poopy, I'll have to get rid of her, I can't risk my beloved poopy, I had her first and our bond is too strong to suddenly abandon her, she already has abandonment issues from when my ex tried to keep her from me for 3 months, I'd feel horrible about giving up the puppy, I love her and she loves me, she's so clingy, goes nuts whenever I leave without her, I just really hate this I'm so stressed out. If you hung on to read this, thank you, you didn't have to, if you have any ideas on what I could do that I might not already be doing please let me know.

Comments

@Lucifer
Thank you I do :) and don't worry I haven't forgotten the brumby, she goes to see him when she can but isn't 'pushing it' with his training, she's letting him get used to her presence first. And no problem, I love Spirit so using a song from the movie was awesome haha its coo to hear another persons point of view on the whole 'Mr. Pierce/Koda 'relationship'' thing. By no means do I condone the kind of thing that's going on there, but I wanted to give it a different feel to it that confuses the reader in some way at least. I'm very happy that y liked the chapter, I hope the next one is also to your liking haha :)

foreverawildone foreverawildone
1/29/16

@foreverawildone


I'm really sorry about bunny. Feel hugged? <3
Nevertheless, the last chapter was great, and I always very much enjoy reading your story. Koda's "relationship" with Mr Pierce gives it a interesting, unique twist. Also I would love to hear more about the brumby (horse fan here). On that note I would thank you for including the song from Spirit in the chapter before that, it made me rewatch the entire movie twice :D

Lucifer Lucifer
1/29/16

@Lucifer


Thank you :) Unfortunately bunny died early yesterday morning, I am at my dads to bury him, which I will do either after I upload this chapter or do the dishes. I am binge watching shows and movies and lavishing my living animals with all my love as a way to cope. I hope you enjoy this chapter, I'm sorry its not very long.

foreverawildone foreverawildone
1/12/16

@X_xAshesx_X


I am very happy that you like it, knowing even one person likes my story can be enough to keep me writing :)

foreverawildone foreverawildone
1/12/16

@foreverawildone
I'm happy your cats are doing better! Find comfort in them, even when the inevedable comes and your bunny does leave you. It sounds like you love your pets a lot, so I'm sure he will have had a good life and that is what counts most.
As for your concerns about writing a book - don't worry! Seriously, many of my favourite authors (like J.K. Rowling or George R.R. Martin) take ages. Rowling took seven years before her first book was even published, and we all know her books are great!

Lucifer Lucifer
1/6/16