A Demon's Bargain - Comments, page 12

@nikitheghoul

Don't get me started! :D

@Maladaptive

Nice! I love that it's "you Fuckhead!"

@smutty pariah
Omgggggggggggggg I'm in love

Since we are in the fountain pen/calligraphy topic...



I couldn't help it. XD

@nikitheghoul

Man, that's nothing! I have a major habit and a decent collection myself.
;3

Here's one of my favorites:

A Sheaffer No Nonsense vintage demonstrator. That one isn't mine, but I have one.

Pen porn omggg

@Maladaptive


Haha, working on it! ;3

I know what happens next in each chapter, but reading again with all these little twists is just SO GOOD. I can't wait for both versions to catch up. It's gonna be one hot, sexy, delicious mess!

@Maladaptive
I forgot, I have to murder my former teacher... *Looks around*

*Spies both the arch-nemesis and The Unforgiven in the dunes*

*flips coin*

Besides the awesomeness of theses revisited chapters and the promise of a completely different ending, you know what I love about this redux? The notes. They are so fun and and informative, the ink samples are genius, I was legimately curious about stuff like that! Please keep doing this!

@smutty pariah
Ben Kenobi will be in charge of Andy's education, you know that. And then you will murder Ben Kenobi.

@Maladaptive

Well, I can think of no greater badass to follow in the footsteps of. Hopefully I, too, shall be redeemed. Though I don't know about having kids. Haha! I guess I'd be down to adopt Andy if he promises to turn into Luke Skywalker and save the galaxy from me. I mean, that seems fair. But I don't wanna pay for his college, Aunt Beru has to deal with that. Hahahaha! I'm off to kill younglings! :D

@smutty pariah
Nope. I'm telling you man, you ARE Darth Vader. It's my birthday (month). You can't contradict me. Sorry, I don't make the rules.

@Maladaptive

Whoa, that's kinky. I totally want my son, since Andy totes has the Skywalker charisma. Shit, even if he were Kylo Ren he'd still be me lusting over my grandkid. Man, I am Darth Evil.

I was envisioning myself as more of a Jabba the Hutt character, though I'd settle for Chewbacca: I always wanted to be taller! Because, to me, Darth Vader is one of the ultimate pimps of evil. I don't know that I'm worthy.

@smutty pariah
I say you as Darth Vader, The Undofrgiven as Han Solo, since, apparently, they are skilled with firearms, and Andy as either Luke or Jar Jar Binks. I'll be waiting for it at the One Shots. Bye.

@Maladaptive

While I'm down to bone most folks that are as wicked as The Unforgiven, I think I'd get shot. While I write lots of sexy business about Andy-man, I'm not actually Andy-man, and T-U knows it. Ha-ha!

If I were to convince the person I am currently boning to work on brainstorming and writing with me, we'd have a lot of Jedi shit and Star Wars ideology coming out of nowhere all of a sudden. So I think I'll refrain, to spare us all.

So you and this Unforgiving human-person are no homo??? aaaaaaaw )))))= Anyway, I'm loving to read this ADR redux, and if there is a prequel you can DEFINITELY sign me up for it!

@Maladaptive

Though, of course, my ego would love being at the head of anything, and being in charge of stuff. So maybe a bowling team would be a better idea? Just so long as the League Team Smutty is ok with not scoring very high. Hahaha!

@Maladaptive

Ha! Not a chance at a league, in the sense of me being able to cooperate with others. I don't generally play well with other people. Anyone is totally welcome to write whatever smutty/filthy thing they want, just not WITH me. This is a one-time thing related to a given character and story line, and a total fluke that happened by accident, it's a long story. Like I think I've said elsewhere, The Unforgiven and I are working on a prequel together, but cowriting is like having a roommate- some people are into it, some people aren't. I'm not. This is a unique situation. Ironically, I find myself doing both, and being ok with it, but I discourage others from trying it with me in the future. Hahahahahaha!

UGH, these edited chapters. They're familiar, but not quite. So good! And the Smut Lord has an accomplice now? Soon it's gonna be the Smutty League!