Night Watch I: Eliza, Ward of Andrew - Comments, page 4

@smutty pariah


guilty. ha!

@anathema


OMG! We've had this discussion! Arch-RIVAL, R-I-V-A-L! You did that on purpose; you're just terrible!

@smutty pariah


and you're reading and loving it, arch-villain! {:-D

You're getting fluffy in your dotage, arch-nemesis! }:D

@Maladaptive

THIS CHAPTER MAKES ME SO HAPPY! *puking rainbows and crying glitter tears*

@Maladaptive

haha! *Andrew starts trying to vogue*

@anathema

A dance with the Second Officer for 12 potato?? GUUUURL, I'm gonna vogue that bitch DOWN!

@anathema


shaking dat bootay!

@Maladaptive

@Maladaptive


maybe a dance with the Second Officer! :D

Aaaaaaw, poor Second Officer is jealous! It's the war effort, Andrew, just buy the damn dance!

On other notes, what can I buy at the acution fort, let's say... 12 potato?

@Maladaptive


haha! :D

Hellur, uncle Henry! <3

And hide yo kids, hide yo cock because they be kickin' everyone in the nuts up in here!

@anathema

Thank you so much! I am a pretty big grammar Nazi, but I do find little errors at times. My spelling is pretty bad, but I edit a lot. Thank you for checking it out!

@DickTwitchForViews


that's not rude to ask. i just have family visiting at the moment. last i read it through, i think i recall that you had major grammar/spelling problems, but i might be thinking of the wrong person (i read a lot). i write everything in word and edit it two times or more before i post it, and i still end up with problems. i think i have some general writing recommendations at the bottom of my profile (i used to get asked really frequently), so, until i have more time, maybe check those out?

@anathema

Look, I hate to be rude. But it would mean a lot if you checked out some of my writing. My last account got shut down and I have been having trouble with views. I could really use some of your constructive criticism.

@DickTwitchForViews

*blushes*

:D

I think it's official. I'm addicted to your writing.

@Maladaptive


well, soon, all of the cinnamon rolls will be baked. some will be eaten. availability of coconut oil, however, should remain constant. :D