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Night Watch I: Eliza, Ward of Andrew - Comments, page 5
Finally caught up with Night Watch! Amazing, as per usual!
And I think you'd like to know that, in my head, Fenwick sounds like Alan Rickman (RIP).
Dude! Sorry for taking so long to catch up!
The smut chapter was absolutely breathtaking! Elizandy smut never fails to make me happy!
The horror story was super cool, I actually like it and I feel sorry for the poor ghost (I'll just make sure not to cross his path).
And this last chapter is actually adorable! It reminds me of when I used to practice with Chinese edged weapons.
I just love Night Watch, man. Keep up the amazing work!
@Maladaptive
dude, we are talking about andy, right? of course he finds time for hair maintenance! i'm willing to bet, even in the heat of battle, there will be time for hair maintenance. even the most dastardly foe must respect the Biersack man-locks!
evil king of trolls: 'prepare to die!'
andrew: 'just a moment, i have some fly-aways!'
evil king of trolls: (concerned) 'goodness gracious, take your time.' (commanding) 'men, give him some space! do you have product on you, or do you need to borrow some of mine?'
andrew: 'i brought some with, but thank you.'
evil king of trolls: *blushes* 'but of course. a little coconut oil just does wonders, doesn't it?'
I finally caught up with Night Watch! Man, it's so good! I'm so glad that Second Officer Andrew and Eliza find for a nice bath to wash off the troll filth, as well as hair maintenance and keeping the romance alive, even as the plot takes a turn for the dramatic. I'm already bracing myself for witchcraft, war and some epicness. Keep up the great work!
@Maladaptive
ahahahaha! oh dude!!! that's hilarious! pity the mountain tigers aren't exactly the epitome of stealth at night (what with glowing eyes), or they could have just strapped the troll to a mount and avoided the strapping/caning/thrashing/beating/ridiculous incident. :O)
it's a shame Eliza doesn't have super-healing! she'd be like an X-men or something if she did! unfortunately, it takes her just as long to heal as everyone else, generally. sometimes she picks at scabs.
With all due respect, Second Officer, but the way you hit Watchman Eliza with that branch seemed more like some sort of rough, amorous foreplay than a tactical procedure. I do accept cleaning LeNoel's cage as punishment for my insolent comment. *already planing how to smuggle treats and toys for the big, stinky cat"*.
Have I told you how much I love Eliza? Also, these chapters depicting the tribe's society and day-to-day life are so precious! <3
Poetic speaking + great kissing = YAS, OFFICER!
Also, I saw the avatars at the guidebook, and they are amazing!
@Maladaptive
i just made some avatars for Eliza, i plan to upload them to the character guide in a bit. unusual for me, but i thought: why not
@Maladaptive
i don't mean to be a loser and cop out, but i have to make her most familiar with the weapons i'm most able to write for, which are european type weapons. lame, i know, but i have a little bit of knowledge about some swords and a bit about axes. i was really hard-pressed even writing the brief few seconds where she faced Pete with a staff, for example, I'd be totally out of my element if i tried to write the rest of this that way. at least i have a small background in archery (albeit modern archery).
Man... I practiced with Chinese edged weapons (swords, knives, spears) for three years. This chapter SPEAKS to me hahahaha. Plus, Eliza is so badass, I'm in love with her too. <3
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Aaaaw! Look at the giant cinnamon roll slaying zombies! <3
Also, why do I have a feeling there's a major plot-twist coming up? What will happen to my other cinnamon rolls? Are they going to be okay? Will Second Officer Andrew have coconut oil available to maintain that glorious hair? The future is so uncertain!
Wow, that was overdramatic.
11/20/16