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What is life?

Anonymous pt. 1

Andy's Point of View

I winced at the light coming through the window that woke me up. Still half asleep I grab my phone from the floor. I almost instantly got up of the sofa I had slept on last night, I'm going to be late on my second day. I get ready quickly and leave.

Kyle's POV

I got into school,Mollie left later because she was waiting on a package. I parked my car up, then beside my vintage bug a stunning mustang pulled up beside, I quickly grabbed my bag from the passenger seat. I was trying to see who the driver of the beauty was but I caught Brad's eye. "Kylz! Over here" He shouted smiling, I walked over to him and put my keys away "Hey dick face" I said Jokingly "Hey! Mollie and your gang aren't around, you can act normal" he said pulling me into a hug, I hugged him back. Okay I may have lied me and Brad get on perfectly fine but just not when others are around us. We both pull away from our hug and make our way to home room which Mr Dennis also takes, he is one busy man. The bell hadn't gone yet so no one was in apart from me and Brad. I grabbed my phone from my bag receiving a text from Mollie saying shes on her way. I went onto Instagram and searched Juliet. After 4 different accounts I found her, I curiously start to scroll down her account. I clicked on one noticing it was her and Andrew, they look so happy, it kinda broke my heart.I clicked onto his account and stared at the name Black, wait I thought it was Dennis. I googled him. Andy Biersack singer/songwriter. Black Veil Brides. These names rung a bell. I looked curiously through his stuff. Suddenly he and Ashley walk in to the room. I look at them both as they look at me. My mind went blank when they walked in. "Morning" Andy says to me and Brad, I quickly lock my phone and turn to Brad. He looks at me with a smile, not going to lie Brad was my first boyfriend in Preschool and at the start of high school we both liked each other but have just stayed friends. "What ever happened to us?" Brad asks out of nowhere "What do you mean?" I looked at him questioningly. His blue eyes looking curiously at me "We used to be best friends, tell each other everything and now we can't even be seen in the hall ways together. We used to care about each other so much but i changed why?" He asked, i often wondered myself. "I could lie and say I don't know but i can't, I personally think that when you and Chloe got together we became disconnected, me and her hate each other. Every time i spoke to you she got involved then we kissed at her 16th, I simply just thought you were a dick that was using me. I hated you because I cared to much about you. You changed" I said honestly, I could sense Andy and Ash listening. "I was not the only one that changed Kyle. You came into school one summer blonde, makeup, you even stopped playing soccer and guitar. Everything felt like it changed, even your personality. Ever guy was after you. I loved you and you changed completely. That's why when Chloe asked me out i though why not. Then at the party, you came had just finished singing, I was so caught up in your music, i thought i seen a glimpse of the real you, we were alone in a room, we spoke and i could help myself. I had to kiss you" He said. "You should have knowing that i would always be the same person" I told him but he just looked away, i sighed and turned away. Andy and Ashley were both looking at me. What an eventful first week. I looked down at my hands feeling awkward. Thankfully the bell rang and as it Ashton came in, he came over and hugged me "You okay little one?" he asked me i just nodded soon everyone was in class. I was now feeling better, their was a sudden knock at the classroom door, it was Alexandra she spoke to Mr Dennis then they both looked at me "Kylie is the blue bug yours?" Alexandra asked "Yes, why?" I asked "You might want to go look at it. It looks pretty beat up" My eyes widened, I grabbed my keys and Pushed pass Alex and Andy. I ran down said to see her smashed up. The back windows smashed, the lights smashed and she was dented, I opened the door, cutting my hand, there was a brick on the back seat with a note attached, this car has been my dream car since i was little and my dad who dead bought her for me. "Kyle? get out the car your gonna hurt yourself" Mr Dennis said, He come over carefully helping me out. I took the note off the brick "Watch your back you little slut. Go kill yourself because no one likes you. They just use you for money and your looks, I mean it bitch, Go get your junkie mom and go dead with your daddy... I do my research! xoxox" the writer had no name, Andy took the letter from me. I looked at my bloody hand tears dripping down my face.

Notes

Comments

Well there are a lot of unnecessary 's' in the end(ironically) of the words. Also there was' an story' in the beginning and 'your' which should be' you are'. Small mistakes like those but seriously nothing major.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17

@Batsy's Robin
What mistakes so I can go fix them? Thanks for the feedback

Faye.19 Faye.19
5/6/17

There were some small mistakes but other than that it starts rather intriguing.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17