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What is life?

Anonymous pt. 2

Andy's point of view

I read the note and when I looked up from it I noticed her left hand dripping with blood and tears rolling down her eyes, the bell ran and I had a free period. "What class so you have?" I asked her "I have PE" she said with a voice crack. "come with me" I told her and she followed, I took her into my class "Sit down" she didn't say anything she just done as I said. I got the first aid kit out and quickly phoned her tetcher explaining he was actually in class but with me. Wrapping the bandage around her hand I found my courage to speak it her.

Kylie's point of view

"Kyls what happened? Why wrote that note?" Mr Dennis asked. I felt myself staring into his concerned blue eyes. "I have no idea, I honestly have no idea who would do that to my considering everyone knows how much it means to me" I said feeling empty as Mr Dennis tended to my cut up hand "I know this is personal but have you maybe accidently started something with someone like you spoke or something more to their boyfriend" he said curiously "No, only person I've done anything with you, I've not even flirted since you" I said as a slight whisper. "Really? I'm not suggesting you have I'm just making sure no one is going to hurt you" He said and it sounds genuine, I nodded and smiled softly dispite feeling shit inside "Kylie I do care about you, I know I lied to you and I honestly didn't mean to hurt you but I was going through a separation but we got back together" he explained quickly so I couldn't cut him off, I nodded "Andrew, I know it may have been hard but you still could have told me, I was so angry, one minute you were there hugging me and the next a note replaced your space, saying it was over then I seen you kissing her, I felt like a complete-" I was put off by his lips on mines, I couldn't resist kissing him back suddenly we were pulled by our kiss with a gasp, I turned to see my sister look right at us, she quickly turned and ran out the door. I looked at Andy who looked in shock. "I'll talk to her" I said to him getting up feeling slightly dizzy, "Sit Kylie, you don't look well, it done, you won't see me after today, sorry, so there is no point you rushing to stop her" he said, I shook my head, I grabbed my phone ordering an uber to go home "Andy she's my sister I'll be able to talk her out of it" I said slightly nervous.

To be continued...


Notes

Comments

Well there are a lot of unnecessary 's' in the end(ironically) of the words. Also there was' an story' in the beginning and 'your' which should be' you are'. Small mistakes like those but seriously nothing major.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17

@Batsy's Robin
What mistakes so I can go fix them? Thanks for the feedback

Faye.19 Faye.19
5/6/17

There were some small mistakes but other than that it starts rather intriguing.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17