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What is life? - Comments

Well there are a lot of unnecessary 's' in the end(ironically) of the words. Also there was' an story' in the beginning and 'your' which should be' you are'. Small mistakes like those but seriously nothing major.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17

@Batsy's Robin
What mistakes so I can go fix them? Thanks for the feedback

Faye.19 Faye.19
5/6/17

There were some small mistakes but other than that it starts rather intriguing.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17