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What is life?

That voice

Andy's point of view

first day as a teacher was successful apart from the part where I found out Hannah is a student I teach. I took a deep breath and sighed at my desk being tired. Most people are home now but I'm staying behind to mark some papers, I got up to get coffee from the staff room when I was stopped in my tracks by the most amazing, strong female voice singing along with an acoustic. I looked sneakily into the small window seeing a brunette that was not a teacher. I opened the door quietly. I was now getting goosebumps, her voice had feeling behind it. She then turned to the side slightly, I knew exactly who she was now Kylie Anderson. I accidentally feel into the door interrupting her. "Fuck!" She yelled getting a fright "Sorry, Mr Dennis I didn't realize you were there" she said apologizing for her outburst. I quickly entered a shut the door "Your voice is beautiful, you didn't say you could sing, you have raw talent" I wouldn't help myself. She smiled softly, got I miss her so much, I need her. I'm even more in love with her now, wait I'm not in love with her. She didn't say a word she just looked at her guitar
"Why didn't you tell me?" I said, I was now sitting on the chair next to her. My hand gently touched her thigh. She looked up into my eyes "why didn't you tell me you were still married?" She asked straight out. I wish I had told her the trust the day she seen that ring, I sighed, "I guess I had that coming" I simply said
"I never told you because I wanted you to see past me, no guy has treated me the same without the voice or known I'm in a band." She explained, I removed my hand from its place and I sighed

Kylie's point of view

I looked him. He looked as if he was thinking, I just tuned Rose up. "I didn't mean to lie-" we were suddenly interrupted but Mrs Lucas and Andy's wife "Found him finally" Mrs Lucas laughed, then looked at me "Hey, Kylie what you still doing back, everyone ran out faster than when it's pizza friends?" She said, I laughed at her unfunny joke "Actually I'm working on my music, you know what I'm like, then I seen Mr Dennis and asked his opinion and help since he is my music teacher" I explained, I got up and grabbed my bag to leave Andy and His wife to talk "Good work Kylie" Mrs Lucas said, I simply smiled and we went out separate ways, I was almost at my car and I realised I left rose in panic, I ran back to get her. I slowed down near the door hearing Andy in a heated argument. He was getting dug right into and as much as he may have made me unhappy, I didn't like people arguing, so me being me I ran in and acted like I didn't hear anything "Oh god sorry I forgot Rose, I mean my guitar" I said quickly stepping between them and put her in her case "You have a name for your guitar?" He asked with his eyebrow lifted and I just nodded, I turned to leave but my was stopped by her "Hey, Kaylie is it?" She said and I turned to look at her and Andy. Andy's eyes were now widened "No it's Kylie actually" I said politically then turned to leave again "Do I know you from somewhere? I feel like we've met" She asked, yeah to be honest you probably do remember me from the time you were talking to the receptionist at the hotel where I fucked your husband, maybe you notice me from there
"No, well not that I know of" I simply said, she scanned my face "I do know you, you were in Florida throughout the summer, I seen you at the recording studio" she said my heart was beating faster than its ever done, Andy looked at me relieved "Perhaps sorry if I seen you I must have forgot because I've just been so focused on my music" I said smiling making sure it doesn't get too awkward. "Oh that's fine, I'm Juliet Simms, Andy's wife" she said. I smiled "I better get home my sister will be wondering where I've gotten to, was nice meeting you" I said swiftly leaving, that was so awkward but I found myself wanting to make Andy happy and to search her up

Notes

Comments

Well there are a lot of unnecessary 's' in the end(ironically) of the words. Also there was' an story' in the beginning and 'your' which should be' you are'. Small mistakes like those but seriously nothing major.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17

@Batsy's Robin
What mistakes so I can go fix them? Thanks for the feedback

Faye.19 Faye.19
5/6/17

There were some small mistakes but other than that it starts rather intriguing.

Batsy's Robin Batsy's Robin
5/6/17