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A Handy-dandy Guide to Writing Real Person Fiction

Lesson #4

So, we've covered a lot of what to avoid. That raises the question regarding what is a good idea, how does one get started?

I. The answer is simpler than you think. Once you get your idea/inspiration, outline (as in write down/record) the entire plot of your story, from start to finish.

It does not have to be totally comprehensive, but you need a latticework from which to build your story, and you need to know where you're trying to end up. This is a good idea for several reasons:

1- A plot with no conflict for the characters to overcome is boring. Determine the conflicts in advance. This will help avoid the meandering pace of stories that are written from chapter to chapter with no end goal in sight.

(a) this will also dodge the inevitable, 'previously stable chick gets together with Andy Biersack, only for her extremely abusive boyfriend who has never been mentioned before to come after her'-type of thing. -a

2- This will help avoid story abandonment, the #1 destination of most fanfictions, and also the bane of the reader. Many, many authors start out with a good idea, but have no idea how to end their story or resolve their problem. Some authors will simply kill off their characters, as they can't come up with any other resolution. Most will just abandon their story and start a new one, which is a major pet peeve of mine.

(a)- me too. a lot of readers will only search for and read already completed stories, so keep that in mind. -a

(b)- for reference, on this website, when you edit your story's description for the first time, the program will automatically check the 'completed' box. make sure you uncheck it if it is not actually finished, then go back and check it when you're finally done. -a

3- This will help you be able to do things like provide foreshadowing, while avoiding major plot holes that are never explained or resolved.

(a)- i totally have a few small plot holes in two stories of mine that i'm currently having to go through and fix with editing. avoid this issue and just outline from the beginning, for sure. -a

(b)- along those same lines, note that this website doesn't always let you edit previous chapters! this is especially the case if you haven't written anything in the 'Notes' section! this is my current nightmare with LOJ, (my first story), so the final version will have to be completely re-uploaded once i'm finished editing! and that bitch is almost 200 chapters! don't let this be you! -a

(c) it also will allow stuff like omission of key facts, only to lead to a surprising grand reveal. -a

(d) also helps keep multiple plot lines (which is ideal) organized. -a

4- You will be able to choose appropriate key words and genres for your story. These are key for attracting an audience that will be happy to read what you have written.

(a)- for example, i don't read tragedies on purpose. if a major, tragic event happens, (e.g. a main character dies {and isn't resurrected or something}), i will be pissed that i spent time reading the story. you should have tragedy checked off as a genre to avoid those kind of unwanted negative comments from angry readers who weren't expecting or wanting a tragedy. -a

II. Tips for outlining:

1- One of the ways some people use to get their idea started is by brainstorming and writing out thought bubbles (also called mind mapping). This allows you to gather together the things you know you want to include in your story, and organize them from there.

2- Outlining comes in many forms, from basic timelines of events to more detailed notes about every occurrence.

3- Before you start, consider each of your main characters. Develop their personality traits, so that they will be consistent throughout your story. This can be anything from their philosophy on life in general to their appearance.

4- Consider, as an actual thing, your story's tone and theme. Should it have a message, something that consistently is threaded through the whole of your story?

5- In a lot of fantasy/steampunk/science fiction stories, the writer creates her own universe. This is termed 'worldbuilding,' and it's a good idea to get as solid a vision of the world you are creating in advance as possible. It is also totally janky to steal the world someone else has created! (Not meant to include fanfic in the classic sense of the word.)

Notes

Outlines, as mentioned, do not have to be down to every last detail, and they can always be modified. But, unless you write your story completely in advance prior to posting (an admirable feat, but one I generally can't make myself do, I'm too impatient), it will give you something to work from and some direction, so the beginning won't end up with something you want to change by the time you get to the middle.

i don't write the whole story in advance, i'd go insane. but kudos to those who do! -a

You have a lot to say today, knock yourself out! -SP :D
whatever, it's called "co-authoring" for a reason, woman! -a

Comments

@Red Phoenix77


You can't on this platform. Any chapter you post on this site will always become the next chapter in the story. To my knowledge, you are unable to rearrange them, and that's unlikely to change, as this site is abandoned by the designer (thus all the technical problems). If you are wanting to re-post chapters in order, you will either need to take down every chapter after the one you want to insert, then repost them after posting it, OR you could tack on the missing chapter to the end of the chapter before it, if your browser will allow chapter editing (some will not).

I'm also on Wattpad, and that platform has the capability to rearrange chapters.

Best of luck!

SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
7/30/17

I see what you mean about losing chapters , one of mine has disappeared for no readily apparent reason . How do I make sure it goes back in the correct spot when I re - post it ?

Red Phoenix77 Red Phoenix77
7/30/17

@nikitheghoul


You're welcome! Glad you liked it. ana can't log in to this site anymore, but I'm sure she'd be glad too.

SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/24/17

YAAAAS LESSON 8 YES BITCH

ghoulbaby ghoulbaby
4/24/17

Lesson five got me wet, haha! I'm a sucker for proper grammar and punctuation and the like, and while I know I should proofread my stories to ensure this I just get lazy! But yes, thank you for giving the basics!

ghoulbaby ghoulbaby
4/24/17