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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

The mental circus, juicy ass, and quitting smoking

*Andy’s POV*

I felt a lot better about mid-way through my cigarette, but this was admittedly not something I felt prepared for. Meeting my brand-spanking-new girlfriend’s boss, in the middle of the night, because I was stealing Gwyn away on short notice, when her boss’ daughter wanted to marry me because of BVB, all while I was wearing clothes Gwyn had been wearing when I fucked her, what, an hour ago? My head spun. Yeah, no thanks.

I had wanted to see more than the lobby of Gwyn’s clinic because I was curious and I liked animals. I’d never really been behind the scenes of a veterinary hospital and I was interested in where she worked. This way, I thought I’d get to see, without the kind of bullshit that was likely to ensue if I tried to visit during business hours. Especially now that the world wide web had just learned where mystery-Twitter-Gwyn worked. Ugh.

Well, fuck it. Gwyn was clearly mad as a hatter. Insofar as I was concerned, given the circus being conducted in between my ears, she was exactly what I wanted and totally worth dealing with an impromptu encounter with her insomniac boss.

I smiled to myself, looking at her butt in her fresh set of black pants. That nice, juicy ass was a pretty sweet bonus! Gwyn had a pretty small waist, compared to her butt and hips. It reminded me of an old painting or something. I walked up to her from behind, and hugged her to me. She fit against me perfectly.

“Ahoy, you.” Gwyn sounded bouncy, but I caught the irritated scowl that had been so quickly replaced on her face as she turned her head.

“What’s up, Doc?” I grinned widely, and Gwyn snorted.

“Cute, cute. Been waiting for that?” She looked up at me, amused, and I bent down for a quick kiss.

“Mmm-hmm.” I hummed into her lips before I broke away, beaming. I couldn’t help it. I was definitely proud of myself for that one! I swear, sometimes I am too funny!

Gwyn rolled her eyes at me, but I could tell that she thought it was hilarious too. Then she turned around to face me and revealed the source of her woes: an empty pack of cigarettes. “It’s time, Hot-shot.” She held up the cigarette in her hand, about 2/3 finished. ”This is my last one, and I can’t buy another pack.” She frowned again. “I apologize in advance for being very cranky, very soon.”

I just hugged her to me, tossing my own cigarette. “Don’t worry about it. I’ll just have to see what I can do to help you relax, I guess.” I gave her my best wicked smile. She looked up at me, the green in her eyes smoky and clouded with anxiety. “Like, I said, babe, don’t worry! If you get to be too much of a bitch, we can go pick you up some patches and some gum once the stores open, on the way to Tacoma. Ok?”

Notes

sorry for the long delay- i just went 13 days without a full day off. at least i have sunday off!

lately, life has been so profoundly heinous, it's been a bit of a struggle to stay afloat. after a certain point, it becomes even more difficult to effectively try to better your situation, which doesn't help much, by gum!

i have found that music and fanfiction are the primary sources of joy in my life. while i enjoy my pets, i don't get to see tons of time with them. i enjoy working with my patients, but my work environment is not a good one.

QOTD: does anybody else either have OR know someone who has Dysthymia?

Comments

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17