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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Well, barf!

* Dr. Viper’s POV*

I fucking swear to shit, if I saw one more motherfucker that was trying to get a prescription for opiates out of me, or any motherfucking controlled drug, I would fucking kill them! Motherfucking junkie pieces of shit! Fucking fuck my life! Fuck!

“Dr. V?” Fucking great, I couldn’t have a fucking sip of coffee, just a single fucking sip, a single goddamned sip, like a normal person? Why couldn’t you hire another fucking doctor, it might take the wait time down from 3 hours to 2 you shits!

“Yeah, what’s up? Is the next one all set?” I turned around, mask up, smile in place.

Gerdy, a woman who had seen it all and who was impressed by nothing, said, “yeah, I guess this fellow is a famous singer in a country band or something? Another patient was videoing him in the waiting room.” Fucking double eew. Both because 1- country, well, barf, and, 2- videoing, well, that’s fucking gross. I felt sorry for the poor fuck.

“Huh.Well, hit me.” She handed me the tablet and I scanned it quickly. I only missed half a step when I went over his name. No, not country! Black Veil Brides was not really my cup of tea, a little light for my taste, but Andy was a good-looking guy, I guess. Sounded like prettyboy had himself a little fit and punched a table. Fucking men, I fucking swear! Dumb as fucking rocks! Who the fuck assaults furniture? What a dumbass motherfucker! Now I would have to waste my time patching up a rock star because he shoved a nail in his hand. At least he was up to date on his tetanus. Fucking idiot. I hoped his ego was under control. I was not in the mood to deal with a bunch of horseshit. I hadn’t even finished my motherfucking coffee.

“Thanks Gerdy, I’ll be out in a few.” I did my customary peek around the curtain to make sure it was kosher to slide the curtain aside to enter, and was met with a surprise.

Yes, Andy Biersack was sitting there, on one of the chairs, sure as shit. Next to him was a woman about my age, with black hair up in a bun and pale skin. She was a pretty big girl, though, I wouldn’t have pictured a fancypants like him with someone like her. But they were holding each other so intimately, I hesitated. I couldn’t go in, I couldn’t interrupt. They just stayed there, still and quiet, their foreheads resting against each other. I backed away.

“Hey, Gerdy…is the one after this ready yet?” My voice must’ve come out maybe a little softer than usual or something, she looked a little worried. “Oh, they just look like they’re having an important conversation, I figured I’d give them a few minutes.” She nodded, and I followed after her, handing her the tablet so she could bring up a different patient, for the time being.

For the rest of the night, I was visited by a host of old memories.

Notes

QOTD:

do you care what’s done with your remains after you die? Burial/cremation/burial at sea/Viking funeral/etc?

Yeah, in the sense that I want the ashes of the pets of mine that have pre-deceased me to be either mixed with my ashes, or buried with me. from there, I guess whatever is cheapest and makes whoever is left alive happiest. I’d rather be cremated/buried with my piercings in, but I know they generally don’t do that. I guess I’d like whatever is cheap, environmentally friendly (as is legal/possible), and preferable for the living left behind that care.

Comments

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17