One Shot - Comments, page 5

@smutty pariah
I mean I've never had the pleasure of meeting anybody named Smutty, but Pariah is a pretty interesting name if you ask me, haha!

And I tend to not write negatively of Juliet either. In this I only used her as a means of story, but trust me I have nothing but good vibes for the couple. And while we're on the subject of writing, I feel like you have some work to do, Miss Smutty! (;

Damn! That was hot!

Being that I am an old, weary, realist, I prefer condom use in my smut, and mentions of Juliet make me uncomfortable in anything but a happy light. But honestly, that's just a matter of my personal idiosyncrasies. Very well written.

Definitely no need for you to write anything about Andy falling for a psychotic, histrionic, egotistical bitch with a severe attitude problem named 'Smutty,' I think your audience for that might be a bit limited. Bwahahahaha!