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Oh babe… That really depends. Some plots go a lot better written in the third person, others in the first. Generally speaking, I’d suggest third person, that’s because, personally, I think it makes it easier to keep to the whole idea of short unrelated chronicles (one shots), and it’s fun to choose a name and build a female character for each chapter – that kind of goes away if you replace most of it with ‘I/me”. However, I also think first person is still an option for developing particular types of plots, and it would be great to see things from the girl’s or even Andy’s perspective every now and then.
I hope I managed to help a little. And I can’t wait for you to update! I miss reading your stuff! <3
I fell out of my chair squealing in homeroom. I said it was a fangirl thing, earning a lot of weird looks from the non-fandom peasants. Reading smut in homeroom.
Keep up the good work!
So hot. So romantic. I'm blushing and (discreetly) squirming in my chair. Don't do this to me, girl! I'm in the office right now! For God's sake!
No, but seriously. I loved it. Keep it up. <3
*Stays in bed with phone a little longer until roommate leaves house because now I'm all turned on. Actually maybe I'll just go straight to the shower...*
Loved it, as per usual!
@smutty pariah
I needed a change after this too honestly.
Also, as to reply to your post on Tumblr, if you call me "the ghoulicious one" more frequently I might be inspired to write more! For some reason I love that your fixation on my username is on the ghoul and not the name!
And I believe you owe me an update, Miss Pear!
Hey sweetheart! So, my firend Pear (yes, *THAT* Pear) knows of this policy I have of leaving nice and SINCERE comments on stories I like. And I like yours A LOT. Writing one-shots can be much defficult than long narratives, and you do it beautifully. So, please, keep writing for yourself, to improve your already great skills, and for everyone in this site that loves what you do. Bye! *rides into the sunset on black unicorn*
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Can you do one where(you choose if its 1st person and all that)there is threesome with the main character/Juju and Andy? haha sorry I have a dirty mind lmao xD
Or one where there is a Baby and Daddy kink lmao
Or on ewhere the mian character and Andy are going through ome struggling times and they get into a fight,Andy leaves and Main character I sleft at home and she starts to back and cries and all that shiz lol and then Andy realizes what he has done and then comes back and it turns to smut and all that good shit haha lmao xD
Just choose which one you would like or do all for all I care lmao
Its greatly appreciated thank you! Love ya!
6/17/16