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WOW such a great story!! Cos your such a great writer I am going to read all/most of you stories. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Addictive. ^.^ I am reading the Girl Across the hall as well. ^.^ XD.
@LostInTheMusic
sometimes you listen to people when you shouldn't. Like at the end of the day, most of the time you are going to trust your family. And you can kind of be brainwashed and have them put thoughts into your head, it's not that hard. Also guilt. I mean, it's simply a story that I definitely did not do very well in the writing category :/ sometimes there are doubts that are at the back of your mind that can be drawn out when something happens...
sometimes you listen to people when you shouldn't. Like at the end of the day, most of the time you are going to trust your family. And you can kind of be brainwashed and have them put thoughts into your head, it's not that hard. Also guilt. I mean, it's simply a story that I definitely did not do very well in the writing category :/ sometimes there are doubts that are at the back of your mind that can be drawn out when something happens...
I don't understand why Lola would ever listen to the parents and siblings that scorned her throughout her adolescent life. If they didn't support her then, of course they aren't going to support her decisions now, so they are going to discourage her from doing what she wants to do. Why would Lola just up and leave the people that had shown her so much more love than anyone else had ever given her?
@britnyaffinity
Lol, thanks, and it's just kind of awkward to write because it's weird to know it came from my mind... And you're right though. And thanks! :)
Lol, thanks, and it's just kind of awkward to write because it's weird to know it came from my mind... And you're right though. And thanks! :)
By the way, I know you said you're annoyed that you made it sexual, but that's kind of what made the story so irresistible to read. I absolutely love Andy's character in this. I'm in love. xD
@britnyaffinity
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!! :)
Ya I stayed up all night watching bryanstars interviews....
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!! :)
Ya I stayed up all night watching bryanstars interviews....
@We are young and we are strong
Hahah it's because I'm in chapter 50 and I was like oh shit, Mayyyybbbeeee I should just stop. I'm at a good point to change to a sequal now
Hahah it's because I'm in chapter 50 and I was like oh shit, Mayyyybbbeeee I should just stop. I'm at a good point to change to a sequal now
@BVBgirl355
This is kinda funny.. Our stories were both updated at like the same time with info about sequel stuff.. :)
This is kinda funny.. Our stories were both updated at like the same time with info about sequel stuff.. :)
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@MoanaBVB
Thank you! I do recognize that parts you left me broken are pretty offensive and disgusting at times and I don't recommend reading it :) but thank you and maybe I will be able to update them again sometime soon <3
2/21/14