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Becoming unbroken

Summary

Lola Samuels has had a pretty good life so far, except for the fact that she never broke up with her fiancé, Erik. Her wedding day comes, and she does what her heart tells her to, run.
What does she do next? And how does she get back on her feet. We all know that we all fall down sometimes.

* I only own a few characters, of course not black veil brides or any of their girlfriends/family etc. I do own the storyline. Also this is my first fan fiction I've posted anywhere so I hope you guys like it :)

the sequel is up, it's called: you left me.. Broken.

Characters

Andy Biersack

Andy Biersack

Lead singer in black veil brides. Very tall, he has not been himself since he broke up with juliet 6 months ago. Is he finally moving on?He is one of the main characters.

Ashley Purdy

Ashley Purdy

Bassist for black veil brides, he isn't always careful with his actions and gets in trouble for them a lot. He is somewhat perverted but becoming more mature..

CC

CC

Drummer in black veil brides, he is hyper to a point. Cc is dating Lauren Watson.

Erik

Erik

Lola's ex fiancé. Claims to still be in love with her, lots of sectrets will be revealed about him later in the story. He and Lola's parents want her back and will go to desperate measures to do so. You have to imagine him until I decide what he looks like:).

Jake Pitts

Jake Pitts

Plays lead guitar in bvb, dating Ella cole. He is ussually hyper but knows the limits. Likes to pick locks.

Jinxx

Jinxx

Married to Sammi, nice kind of quiet compared to some of his band mates. He is one of the most mature. He always seems to be at the wrong place at the wrong time.

Lola Samuels

Lola Samuels

Lola is 20, she is very shy around new people but once you get close to her she is very outgoing. Lola is her insecure and says she is sorry a lot. Lola already got over her fiancee. will she find someone else? She is the main character.

Sammi Doll

Sammi Doll

Sammi is very generous and kind. She is very welcoming of Lola and wants to do anything to help her. Sammi is very optimistic and super energetic. She is married to Jinxx and loves coffee. She always seems to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. ;)

Chapters

  1. Chapter 1

    Lola's P.O.V.

  2. Chapter 2

    Sammi's P.O.V

  3. Chapter 3

    Lola's P.O.V.

  4. Chapter 4

    Lola's P.O.V.

  5. Chapter 5

    Lola's POV

  6. Chapter 6

    Lola's POV

  7. Chapter 7

    Lola's P.O.V.

  8. Chapter 8

    Lola's P.O.V.

  9. Chapter 9

    Lola's P.O.V.

  10. Chapter 10

    Andy's P.O.V.

  11. Chapter 11

    Lola's P.O.V.

  12. Chapter 12

    Lola's P.O.V.

  13. Chapter 13

    Lola's P.O.V.

  14. Chapter 14

    Sammi's P.O.V.

  15. Chapter 15

    Lola's P.O.V.

  16. Chapter 16

    Lola's P.O.V.

  17. Chapter 17

    Lola's POV

  18. Chapter 18

    Sammi's P.O.V.

  19. Chapter 19

    Lola's POV

  20. Chapter 20

    Lola's P.O.V.

  21. Chapter 21

    Lola's P.O.V.

  22. Chapter 22

    Lola's P.O.V.

  23. Chapter 23

    Lola's P.O.V.

  24. Chapter 24

    Lola's POV

  25. Chapter 25

    Lola's POV

  26. Chapter 26

    Lola's pov

  27. Chapter 27

    Lola's POV

  28. Chapter 28

    Lola's POV

  29. Chapter 29

    Lola's POV

  30. Chapter 30

    Lola's POV

  31. Chapter 31

    Andy's POV :)

  32. Chapter 32

    Andy's POV

  33. Chapter 33

    Andy's pov

  34. Chapter 34

    Lola's POV

  35. Chapter 35

    Erik's POV

  36. Chapter 36

    Lola's POV

  37. Chapter 37

    Andy's POV

  38. Chapter 38

    Lola's POV

  39. Chapter 39

    Lola's POV

  40. Chapter 40 (last chapter)

    Andy's POV

  41. Sequel info

    Got deleted. Site sucks.

Comments

@MoanaBVB
Thank you! I do recognize that parts you left me broken are pretty offensive and disgusting at times and I don't recommend reading it :) but thank you and maybe I will be able to update them again sometime soon <3

We are young and we are strong We are young and we are strong
2/21/14

WOW such a great story!! Cos your such a great writer I am going to read all/most of you stories. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Addictive. ^.^ I am reading the Girl Across the hall as well. ^.^ XD.

MoanaBVB MoanaBVB
2/21/14
@LostInTheMusic
sometimes you listen to people when you shouldn't. Like at the end of the day, most of the time you are going to trust your family. And you can kind of be brainwashed and have them put thoughts into your head, it's not that hard. Also guilt. I mean, it's simply a story that I definitely did not do very well in the writing category :/ sometimes there are doubts that are at the back of your mind that can be drawn out when something happens...
We are young and we are strong We are young and we are strong
10/30/13
I don't understand why Lola would ever listen to the parents and siblings that scorned her throughout her adolescent life. If they didn't support her then, of course they aren't going to support her decisions now, so they are going to discourage her from doing what she wants to do. Why would Lola just up and leave the people that had shown her so much more love than anyone else had ever given her?
LostInTheMusic LostInTheMusic
10/30/13
@britnyaffinity
Lol, thanks, and it's just kind of awkward to write because it's weird to know it came from my mind... And you're right though. And thanks! :)
We are young and we are strong We are young and we are strong
8/16/13
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