Survival or Struggle? - Comments, page 10

@rain-drops-on-roses
Awwww, thank you so much. :)
It's always nice to see how people like my story. :)

Oh my gosh this is amazing!!! The writing is terrific, and the plot is beautiful, well done.

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
Awww, thank you. :)
I felt Ashley had been down long enough, lol.
And I should get an update in sometime this week. I'm making myself do it, haha.
And who knows, maybe they will find a doctor, but who said that doctors play nice??

About time that sleepyhead woke up! Haha

That was a nice touch and ending to the chapter. Now they can kick some serious zombie ass without having to worry about fallen comrades XD

The question remains, though. Will they find doctors who won't try to have them for lunch...?

Can't wait for more ♡ update whenever you can, there's nothing to apologise for

@Janxx__666
Awww, thank you. :)
I love writing this story so far. It just sucks that it takes a bit to update, haha. :)
Glad you like the story. :)

This is amazing! It's so unique and creative. I can't wait for more updates!

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
Thank you for all the advice! :) I will be sure to do that in future chapters. And no, not a broken back. Nothing's set in stone yet. The heatwave finally broke today, so it was easier to think, haha. And you're welcome, Adblock does wonders for mine. I think it saved me from so many viruses, haha.

Woohoo, Andy saved the...day? Or night? Lol. Anyway, the new chapter was interesting, even with no zombies. I liked when Andy lifted Ash up and complained abought his weight, I can totally see him doing that in real life haha (on another note, I wonder how much Ashley weighs...he's kind of a small guy).

The fact that Ash still hasn't woken up may also be due to a concussion. He must've hit his head pretty hard when he got slammed into that wall. Or simply shock, exhaustion, an adrenaline crash etc but that's not exciting at all haha. For future reference: I wouldn't go with a broken back if I were you, since that would've killed him already or at least left him paralysed with how much he got moved around. Just a thought, you're free to do whatever you want ^^

Now, a teeny tiny piece of advice: you should try not to use their names so often because it gets sort of tiring. You can use pronouns and other expressions instead, like "the singer/drummer/etc", "the blue-eyed/pink-haired/dark-skinned/tall/short/etc male/female/zombie", "his/their bandmate/friend" etc etc. This will help to improve your writing :)

Also, I feel your pain of suffering through a heat wave. Here it's been like 40+ degrees Celsius with high humidity and no wind every day for the past 2 weeks x___x and I live in a city with barely any vegetation (we have ONE park...)

Have fun and see you next chapter! ^^

P.S. I got Adblock and it's working wonders, thanks!

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
I'm not getting anything. Well, I have great anti-virus stuff. And a great anti-pop-up blocker. Get Microsoft Security Essentials for virus protection. And Adblock Plus for pop-up blocking. :) It works awesome for me. :) I hope it helps. :)

Hi again :) this has nothing to do with the story but I've been getting a fuckload of popups and "computer has viruses" messages all over this site since a couple hours ago. Am I the only one...?
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(sorry for the spam)

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
Awww, thanks. :) Your ideas were perfect. It got my mind going. And I have somewhat of an idea of how the next chapter will go. :) Won't be a long wait for the next chapter, hopefully. -chuckles-

Great chapter, as expected ^^ I'm glad I could help you. Can't wait for the next chapter

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
Awwww, well thank you. And thank you for the awesome ideas. But I'm not planning on letting them die or turn into zombies. I plan to have all of them survive, just not unscathed. -chuckles-
And you're not lame, it's actually awesome you really like the story enough to actually give me ideas. I did ask what the readers wanted to see and all. And now that I have some ideas of where to take the story, it can continue. :) And it's not lame at all, I promise. :)

Hi :) first of all I wanna say that I love this story already. I made this account just for it.
I think they should stay in there until Ashley wakes up.
Maybe some zombies break in while he's still unconscious (Andy comes to the rescue?) and they have to run.
You could also make one or two chapters focusing on Andy, Jake and Jinxx, showing how they managed to stay alive.
They could bump into some guys from other bands who are still human and try to fight the zombies together.
There could be some mad scientist / creepy government experiment behind this zombie stuff.
Relationship wise, can you squeeze in some Andley / Cashley bromance? They are just too good friends to pass this up ♡
One last request. Please don't kill any of them. You can hurt
them all you want, even turn them into zombies, just don't break my heart making them die :(
Sorry if this is lame, I'm nowhere near a writer...
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@onefinalfightdoe
Thanks and I will continue this. Though, work gets in the way. But I'll update as much as I can before and after work. :)

OMG
Zombies & BVB is the best idea ever and I want this to continue
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Thank you. :)
It's my first story on here. Stay tuned for more. :)

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