Henwood's & Biersack's

@DayTripper
Thanks, I'm trying something new. Sorry about the script like thing, but thats how I write all my stories.

And we say "yer" a lot too instead of "your" or "you're" :P but keep trucking :) this is fab

This is actually really interesting. I've never seen this done before. My only gripe is that it reads like a script which personally I'm not into. But otherwise this is fab :D

And as somebody from the south, I've heard people talk like that so your dialogue makes sense :3 feel free to add in words or phrases like "crik" (which is a creek, like a small river) or "bless your heart" (which we use either as an I'm sorry for you or a way to insult people without coming outright and saying what's in our minds). And as this is set in the 19th century remember it is illegal to sneeze in public streets but legal to beat your wife after church at the court house in Sunday's :D