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Unforgiven...

Beginning of the horror...



I poured milk into a bowl of coco pops, and placed it on the table. I glanced at the clock and sighed. "Alice come on sweetie or we'll be late." I called up the stairs, andI heard her small feet patter down the stairs. followed by a pair of heavy footsteps. I smiled as my daughter ran into the kitchen, and wrapped her arms around me. "Morning momma." She said, and I gently kissed her before she ran to the table, and sat down to eat her breakfast. I saw Andy walk in,and he wrapped his arms around the back of me, and placed his head on my shoulder. "Morning babe."
"Morning sweetie, your breakfast will be ready in a minute." I said, and he smiled, nipping at my neck slightly. "Oi stop it." I warned, and he let go, grinning. I placed his breakfast down, and he ate it as Alice talked to him.

I grabbed her backpack, and placed her school lunch in it. Suddenly she flew past me, and sat on the top shelf on the wall. "Alice Marie biersack you get down here now!" I said, and she flew down, and folded her wings away. "Now com on sweetie, you can't do that at school."
"I know momma, I just wanted to get it out." She said, and I smiled as she put on her back pack. "Right then come on baby, lets go." Andy said, putting on his coat, and taking her hand. "See you later babe." He said, kissing me, and I smiled as they left.

This was my life now. Me and Andy had gotten married, and after one year of marrige, had our amazing daughter Alice. She was half human, half angle, but was still a beautiful, amazing young girl. Me and Andy couldent be happier, and I was so happy about everything about my life. I put on the telly, and began to watch Batman. I unfolded my wings, and gently combed them out, straigtening my feathers. I suddenly felt a shiver go down my spine. I folded away my wings quickly. I walked over to the window which was open,an shut it. I looked up at the sky, and the clouds had gone a strange grey colour. To a human, it would look normal, and like a storm was coming on, but to an angel, it looked different. To me, it spelt trouble, and I knew that something bad was going to happen up in the clouds...


DAMEONS POV

I looked over all the shadows, who were standing there in rows, waiting for my speach. I had heard of something terrible, something disgracful, which was making a fool out of all angels. I stood up, and looked out over every shadow in the room, and there were thousands of them. "My followers, I have gathered you here today to tell you about something terrible, and something that we need to stop. A few years ago, a young angel named Bunni Dark fell from the sky, and was found by a young man named Andy Biersack, who saved her. She came back here for a few months, but then dissapeared back down there, and hasn't been seen since. That was 8 years ago, and I sent down a willing angel to spy on her. He came back and told me that she got married to the Biersack man, and has now got a child which they named, Alice Marie Biersack."

There were gasps all around the room, and whispers. "To make this even more disgusting, the young child is half human, and half angel!" I said, and everyone in the room gasped, and shared their disgust aloud. "Silence! Now, we all know this is against the laws of the angels, and the whole thing needs to be stopped. With a half human angel child running around of earth, she could expose the existance of angels to the entire human race! We need to stop this, and we need to destory the child before it's too late!" I roared, and they all roared back at me in agreement. This was the start of the hunt...

Notes

I hope yoy like the first chapter :) remember to comment for a shout out :)

Comments

Loved this story so much!!!!!!!! You had such a creative writing style and each chapter was perfectly written. :)
OMG I absolutely loved this story!!!!
I seriously loved this story! I adore your writing and how you developed these wonderful characters! :)
BVBgirl355 BVBgirl355
8/2/13
Thanks for the shout out and also I just have to add this.... I knew he was a blood angel I just knew it!
Oh.my.god. Dameon was...he and...but I...and...Wat
BVBgirl355 BVBgirl355
8/1/13