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Together We'll Set The World On Fire

UPDATE

Hey Everyone!
So i rewrote/added somethings to that last chapter so i recommend rereading it!!! Sorry about that XD anyway also there is going to be a sequel called "There Are Some Wounds That Can't Be healed"
So no this is not the end of the story, i'm not that cruel XD
Thank you so much everyone for your kind words and constructive critiques! I really really appreciate them as i have been going through a really hard time and coming home from school nearly everyday crying and then reading your supportive or funny comments is the only thing i look forward to everyday :)
Hope you all are doing well because you're AWESOME
Thank you everyone!!!

Notes

Comments

@dead_on_the_inside
Thank you, i'm actually really glad that you brought that to my attention so again THANK YOU :) and thank you for your concern i hope that i am able to get away from my current situation very soon :) so again THANK YOU :) <3 <3

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
11/29/14

This is so great. I'm sorry about how you've been feeling lately I hope you feel better soon.

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
11/29/14

@dead_on_the_inside
Thank you for your input :) I actually really appreciate that you took the time to write that out and actually give me an honest opinion :) Anyway the reason the ending is so abrupt is because there is a sequel so the story is not over in any way shape or form. But anyway thank you for your advice and i definitely will take it under advisement and do my best to put more emotion into my writing!!! Thanks to your suggestion (i don't usually redo chapters but i don't want to disappoint anyone!) i think i'll add some more content to the last chapter and then start on the sequel :) Again thank you so much for your comment and i'm flattered that you think i'm one of the best writers on the site :D And i didn't even notice that my writing has been falling down a little so thank you for bringing that to my attention!
Thanks so much!!!

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
11/29/14

To be completely honest. I love your story. You are a great writer. But this ending is shit. You could have ended it so much better and still had the same ending if you actually put time into this last chapter. I have loved both of these books so much and honestly you are one of the best writers on this site but this last chapter was lazily written. You have so much potential to write a better chapter and ending. This story deserves a better ending. And I don't mean a happy ending but a better written ending. If you don't want them together than put some actual emotion into the down fall. And I'm sure it's not just me who thinks the quality of this ending could have been better.

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
11/28/14

b-bu-bu-bu-bu-b-b-b-b-b- WHHHHYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

punk dancer punk dancer
11/28/14
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