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Together We'll Set The World On Fire - Comments

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@dead_on_the_inside
Thank you, i'm actually really glad that you brought that to my attention so again THANK YOU :) and thank you for your concern i hope that i am able to get away from my current situation very soon :) so again THANK YOU :) <3 <3

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
11/29/14

This is so great. I'm sorry about how you've been feeling lately I hope you feel better soon.

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
11/29/14

@dead_on_the_inside
Thank you for your input :) I actually really appreciate that you took the time to write that out and actually give me an honest opinion :) Anyway the reason the ending is so abrupt is because there is a sequel so the story is not over in any way shape or form. But anyway thank you for your advice and i definitely will take it under advisement and do my best to put more emotion into my writing!!! Thanks to your suggestion (i don't usually redo chapters but i don't want to disappoint anyone!) i think i'll add some more content to the last chapter and then start on the sequel :) Again thank you so much for your comment and i'm flattered that you think i'm one of the best writers on the site :D And i didn't even notice that my writing has been falling down a little so thank you for bringing that to my attention!
Thanks so much!!!

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
11/29/14

To be completely honest. I love your story. You are a great writer. But this ending is shit. You could have ended it so much better and still had the same ending if you actually put time into this last chapter. I have loved both of these books so much and honestly you are one of the best writers on this site but this last chapter was lazily written. You have so much potential to write a better chapter and ending. This story deserves a better ending. And I don't mean a happy ending but a better written ending. If you don't want them together than put some actual emotion into the down fall. And I'm sure it's not just me who thinks the quality of this ending could have been better.

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
11/28/14

b-bu-bu-bu-bu-b-b-b-b-b- WHHHHYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

punk dancer punk dancer
11/28/14

NOOOOOO NO NO NO AH FUCCCCKKKKK NOOOOO. PLEASE DEAR GOD DONT LET IT END THIS WAY FUCKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT SO MUCH STILL BUT NNOOOOOOO DONT LET IT END THIS WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
11/28/14

Noooooooooooooooooooo!

IzzieDeadnow IzzieDeadnow
11/26/14

Nooo, not a girl

Janelle Janelle
11/25/14

oh shit, that's not good

punk dancer punk dancer
11/25/14

:O

Janelle Janelle
11/15/14

ahhhhh!!!!!! <3 it!

IzzieDeadnow IzzieDeadnow
10/22/14

@IzzieDeadnow
New update has been added ;)

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
10/20/14

Oh shit! I can't wait for more!!!!

IzzieDeadnow IzzieDeadnow
10/19/14

Shit is going down

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
10/17/14

Ohhh nooo, this can't be happening

Janelle Janelle
10/8/14

ooohhh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AB.AP.JP.JF.CC.girl AB.AP.JP.JF.CC.girl
10/8/14

@kenken01
aww thank youuu i'm glad you like it so much ;D

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
10/8/14

@Janelle
The newest chapter explains what happened with Carl ;) and you're welcome ;)

Sleep is Temporary Reprieve Sleep is Temporary Reprieve
10/8/14

OMG YOU SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME I WAS CRYING SO HARD! I LOVE THIS STORY SO FUCKING MUCH! YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!

dead_on_the_inside dead_on_the_inside
10/8/14

Omg thank you for not killing her. I wonder what happened..

Janelle Janelle
10/8/14