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The Preacher's Daughter

Chapter Eleven: Suprise, Suprise

Wednesday afternoon

"Gracie order up!" Maddie yells sliding the beacon cheese burger towards me. I nod and grab it walking to Mr. Maine.

"Beacon and Cheese burger with large chilly cheese fries." I beam placing the food on the table.

Every Monday and Wednesday I work at the local diner in town, I am saving up for college. I don't want to go to one of my church's colleges. I want to go to UCLA, that has always been my dream.

"Oh my god man!" Five guys barged into the diner with tiring looks on their faces. Wow they are indeed handsome... But no one can compare to Andy.

"Hi, what can I do for you?" I ask grabbing note pad.

"Coffee, and keep them coming." The guy with the hat says, what are they mexican? I love the other guy's ears.

"Sure, anything else you have to try our avocado burrito, its extreme."

"Bring five of that as well," the taller one says. "He turned to his friends and grin. "what are you eating?"

The four guys laughed but the taller one is serious. "Coming right up gents." I penciled the order in and place it at the kitchen counter.

"Five coffees," I whisper setting I down. "And five burritos, if you need anything just-"

"Gracen!" I close my eyes knowing that voice.

"I am busy Mary, not now." I say nodding my way to the five boys.

Her eyes grew wide as she paced towards me. "Pierce The Veil in Red Forth?" She whispers.

"Who?" I ask confused.

"They are pierce the veil, amazing hot mexicore band, they are joining Andy and Ashley on warped." She announced.

"I did know that, anything else?" I ask my sister tapping my flat on the floor.

"Uh yeah," she mumbles handing the boys a paper. "Sign." She turned back to me and grin. "Andy is here."

What?

Notes

Comments

This was absolutely amazing <3

YOU BROKE ME
YOU FUCKING BROKE ME

sorryimpsycho sorryimpsycho
3/5/15

This is so good!

fallingdown fallingdown
7/31/14

Ugh, I actually fucking cried!
you fucking broke me

To be fair, I wanna know what will happen to Andy, but that's it..
it was an amazing story

You should at least write an epilogue. Or write a mistake the doctors made it will not be the end!!!!