The Unbreakable Broken

she was just laying there on top of the blankets. her legs all torn up from cutting. Jennifer was in the front room with Ashley trying to explain to her parents and jon what happened.
" of course you just happened to have been there when she was at her weakest point." Andy defiantly.
" of course cause I fucking care unlike your whoreish ass who was probably drinking with tonight's new girl." Bret.
"I do to care about her! and for your information I was getting some sense knocked into me by Alex and Jennifer." Andy was about to blow. you could tell by his voice. but Bret was pushing him till the end
" oh so now that someone more deserving of her has her, you have to get some self realization moment. this is great the asshole has a mission."
"at least I didn't take advantage of a girl who wasn't in her right mind from blood loss." Andy was yelling.
"yeah well your the reason she is in this situation." it got quiet so I couldn't hear a thing. "you heard me. your the reason she doesn't love you anymore." That's it Bret. your dead, courtesy of Andy. there was a loud crash. Rachael started to stir. fuck no she is not getting up yet. not with all this chaos.
I walked into the back lounge where Andy and Bret where. they where tearing each other apart."stop!" I yelled. they froze " separate sides both of you." they did so. "You." I pointed at Bret." made a move at the wrong time. she obviously loves Andy still. wait or be ignored. I don't care at the moment. get off this bus. I will fix your mess. again." he didn't move. " now." he left. "Now you." I turned to Andy. "you fucked up majorly. this poor child loved you more than any thing and you cheated on her with countless woman." his brilliant blue eyes where sad. "Andy, I would like to say he is wrong but darling her legs have a story. She has trees and hearts and stars. but mostly you. just Andy over and over again." he looked about to cry. " now I'm not saying give up. in fact I'm saying try harder she deserves better." the last part slipped out. he nodded and left on the way out he ran into rachael. he took her with him out of the bus and you could see tears running down his face when he looked at her fresh cuts.

Notes

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