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The Girl With The Dragon's Blood - Comments
This was a really good story! (: Great job.
You have a few mistakes, but it's nothing major. You just need to make a new paragraph each time someone speaks.
It doesn't affect the quality of the story though.
Amazing! :D <3
@CaptainEHook95 omg I was thinking of that name too when i was done reading
Love it. :) you could end it here. It's a perfect ending too. :) I think you start up a sequel and make it a few years after this story and talk about Ashley's and Tora's lives. Just a thought. Trust me I've been there when I wrote my story. But this chapter is the perfect ending.
this story has been amazing from start to finish! You should maybe do a sequel? the ending was AMAZING! you had me literally in tears :')
I honestly think it is a good ending! This story was more focused on the fight than the romance, I thought. So maybe you could do a sequel about Tora's life once she is done with school, and focus more on the romance between her and Ashley. Thanks for writing such a great story!
@The Wretched And Divine
I was typing on my phone and the paragraph breaks got lost in translation. Lol
2/9/15