The Cost Of Winning - Comments, page 6

Omg sooooo exvited for them honestly just got so excited reading that last chapter ☺️

Cool beans, Ashley - that's a step in the right direction!

Mystery solved. Time to step it up, Ashley!

Good to know... :)

@Merelan
Oh , not by a long shot ! You'll hear some more about this one in the next chapter . Let's just say that it'll clarify some of her previous actions .

OoooOoh, who's Fianna finally done with? Doesn't sound like it's Ashley...

@Merelan
Yeah , he's finally catching on to the fact that , even if he's upset with Fianna , he screwed up , too . Now they just have to figure out how to work around it , to make things okay for Brenna . Glad you're enjoying it !

Ok, now, that's more like it! Ashley seems to have figured out he's not going to get away with much, if he wants little miss in his life.

Excellent story!

@well then
Thanx ! Glad you like it ! I'm pretty sure he's figuring out , between Ryan and CC , that he'd better be getting his act together . So we'll see how he behaves himself from now on .

YOOOOOOOOOO! I'm getting so mad at reading this! I'm a crazy bitch, Ashley would be catching some major hands with the shit he's pulling!

Really good so far btw

@Merelan
Yeah , he's not quite seeing the big picture yet . We'll see if he gets there .

Poor Ashley just can't do anything right! He's gonna have to straighten up and swallow his temper...

@bvb-army
Glad you're enjoying it ! As I mentioned to someone before , I've sort of co - opted some of the way my niece talked at that age . It can be pretty entertaining sometimes , it's almost like they're speaking a different language . And I figured with Fianna being a single mom until now , they'd have a pretty close relationship , since they didn't have any actual family besides each other . Kinda like "The Gilmore Girls" , I guess .

OMG, Bren is so real I love how you've done her speech and I love the relationship between her and Finna. I can't wait to see how this story turns out

@onefinalfightdoe
Can't get anywhere without a bit of drama , y'know .

Aw :C
This chapter was adorable but then realllly sad DX

When Bren said lello (◕‿◕✿) OMG she is such a sweetheart

@Untitled93
Thanx ! Good to know that people are enjoying it . Unfortunately , I'm gonna have to cut my updates back to once a week for awhile , since my job is trying to kill us with overtime . So I will be updating my first story on Saturdays , and this one on Sunday evenings . Hopefully , they'll get tired of it in a month or so , then maybe I can do things a bit more often .

I love this story! I hope to read more soon!

@that_one_metal_chick_sierra
Thanx a lot , glad you like it ! I'll be starting the next chapter in the next couple of hours .