The Cost Of Winning - Comments

@Merelan
Definitely something to consider. If not an actual prologue, it would probably be interesting to have her remember some of the things that happened in this book, so i'll most likely have to find a way to work that in somewhere. Thanx for the thought!

Oh yes PLEASE a sequel! I would love to see events through Bren's eyes! Something fun you might consider is a recap of the story told by a teen Been, as like a prologue.
I look forward to seeing what you devise next!

@Merelan
Cool, glad you enjoyed it!

Awww, such a sweet chapter! Yay for Ash and Fi!

Ah, I love this story! Good on you, Fi!

@Merelan
Thanx, I'm glad you're still enjoying it.

I really love the interactions between Ash and Fi... so cute!

When he calls her darlin ♥

Yay! Warm fuzzies chapter - it seems like everything's going well for Ash and Fi... for the moment...
:)

@Merelan
Sometimes when you have a bad example, it makes you want to do better. She wants to be the mom that she didn't have as a kid.

Fianna is so right... she's an awesome Mom. Love your story, see you next Sunday! :)

@Merelan
Hey, I'm perfectly okay with repetition! Thanx again!!

::le sigh::
I may be repeating myself, but lovely chapter as always!

@Merelan
For sure! You'd think that would be true for everybody, but for some reason we seem to have entirely too many people doing dumb crap and getting themselves hurt where I work. This is why I make sure my hands are totally out of the way when parts are moving. I've informed my boss that if something gets cocked up, I'm just gonna let it go ahead and mess up the product, because I have no intention of reaching in to save it.

We absolutely can't have that... you need your fingers, lol!
:)

@Merelan
Thanx so much, I'm glad I can brighten up your day. I wish I could actually read or something while I'm at work, but if I did my machine would probably try to eat me or something.

Right?
I love this story, it's the highlight of what's usually a boring night at work.

@Merelan
I guess it did, at that. He just doesn't want to find himself in the situation they were in the first time they were together.

WOW! Did marrying Fi turn Ash into... a responsible adult???
*faints*
:)

@Merelan
Sweet, glad you liked it!