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@smutty pariah
Dylan in some deep trouble that's for sure~ What do you think Ray will do??
@onefinalfightdoe
Thank you so much! The story loves you too but please refrain from making out with it. jkjk :D
I loved the cloud!
Ugh. That was really pretty dumb to apologize first, and then bring up the girlfriend downstairs. D'Oh! Sort of totally invalidated the whole thing, in a way...
Interesting! Must be tough, unless she was a lefty to start with (I would guess not, if she's pulling triggers with her right hand?). Cool that she bonded with Jinxx!
@smutty pariah
Hey, they have their reasons! Now that they are all healed up, they have to stay aware. Everyone knows cannibals make good hosts until you're fat enough to eat :P
@smutty pariah
I'M NOTICING A PATTERN THAT I DON'T LIKE SO I'M GONNA UPDATE AGAIN SO IT WILL GET TO THE HAPPY
*edit - faster, get to the happy faster
@smutty pariah
I'm glad you like! Let me know if you want more, cause I'm open to oblige. Hahaha, I can't argue with your logic and experience. I think I was going for "heart pounding, but staying calm" kind of feel, but didn't know how to shorten it. When I was rereading I couldn't erase it cause it amused me in a way, lol. Take it as poetically as you can haha.
@Ana Lace
Yeah, his timing was totally dick. But as for having another person show up to help, she's pretty unjustified getting angry, given that she had six people show up, really.
6/3/16