Login
Intergalactic Prison - Comments, page 5
@smutty pariah
Oh I got it. Well (y/n) is kind of a woman of strong opinion isn't she? I love your stories.
@Underworld's Heiress
She only ever put a shirt on to investigate her hunch after she left Andy's den. So she's only wearing a shirt at the moment. Andy pointed out that they could stop by her room to pick up some pants or something for her, but she said it didn't really matter what they wore, since it's just the two of them.
@username_2349
Hey man, I'm already beta-reading another story on here, and I haven't gotten very far in it. You can try asking me again later, but in the meantime, you can check out the guide I co-wrote with my arch-nemesis to writing real person fiction, it contains essentially all of the advice I've ever given to other writers. Here's a link: KABLAM!
Hey I've read all your stories for a while now and I'd love some feedback on my story and how it's going so far. If you're not busy I'd appreciate if you read it and gave me some tips. Only if you're not busy.
@Underworld's Heiress
It was in the Regency/Victorian Era, so maybe more 18th century, but the time frame wasn't too important to the story.
@smutty pariah
Oh I read this one. I have a doubt. The story was in 19th century or that is just me understanding wrong? And thanks for the advices, so I'll keep the scene. :D
@Underworld's Heiress
I wouldn't worry about it, because you're writing a fictional story. So, in your story, it's totally fine if Andy can swim very well, because it's understood that you're writing fiction. In one of my stories, I made Andy a very skilled horse rider, even though I know, in real life, he doesn't care for horses (I Didn't Want to Get Married), for example.
@smutty pariah
oh I got it. Because I didn't knew about Andy not swing so I have thought about he saving his wife (not Juliet in my story) in a lake when she tries suicide because he betrayed her (in true the other woman that kissed Andy, he didn't corresponded). I don't know if I change this or not. Because even it's a real life character my story still being fictional...
@Underworld's Heiress
Do you mean real-life Andy Biersack, or one of my characters? Insofar as real-life Andy is concerned, I do think he is a fairly courageous guy, and he's already going through a lot on a daily basis just to be with his wife, because some people are so hateful. I think it would take a real coward not to risk his or her life for someone he or she loves, and I don't believe that real-life Andy is a coward.
Author
Stats
- Rating
- 10.0
- Votes
- 34
- Subscribers
- 46
- Comments
- 254
- Views
- 63,100
NOOOOO! This is ending? This can not end... Please. I'm afraid of the end, and I'm not prepared to saying goodbye to this story yet. This one is my favorite one. The best of the best. I love this so much that I can't describe with simple and mortal words....
2/21/17