Children of Dawn - Comments, page 2

Yee-haw! 'Bout time Andy makes some kinda entrance to this story! This chapter definitely makes up for the past couple weeks, sugar!

And I know this is bound to make me sound like a dunce hiding under a rock, but do explain that comment about Juliet being an abusive bitch in Reality... I no longer have home WiFi, and had other things that recently took precedence over trolling the Interwebz, so I've been trying to use my phone's data sparingly...
~Cyn

Ahhh...after reading this chapter and the last couple comments, now I know why I never caught your song reference in the last chapter... I don't listen to MIW, so I took it as a descriptive phrase. LOL!

Great chapter this week, as always! Keep up the amazing work, sugar!
~Cyn

@colorguardislife
What can i say... i'm not anyone xD
The beach that was "motionless in the white snow" kind of stood out to me (the phrasing i mean) then after reading the AN i realised why haha

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
City Lights haha I didn't anyone would actually notice it!

I got the band *cough*miw*cough* but what's the song?

@colorguardislife
I might have to go reread it when I can get the insane sexiness that is Nikki Sixx outta my head... Gah...did I just say that!?
~Cyn

@CynysterLove
It may have been too subtle but within the writing there is a band name and a song by that band, it was the inspiration for the chapter.

Either your reference was too subtle, I was too distracted, or I'm just on too much of a Motley/Sixx:A.M. kick right now... *shrugs* It was still a great chapter, though! Keep up the great work, sugar!
~Cyn

@colorguardislife
Okay, so I'll just pretend that's what happened, and that Ashley got hurt only a week or so before the big meeting... LOL! Either way, as many different stories as I read, on top of writing my own, it's not surprising I often have trouble keeping up with timelines...
~Cyn

@CynysterLove
Jinxx and Ashley were supposed to stay put for 8 months after they found each other for the time when Jake and CC met to make sense.

My memory apparently sucks because I've never been able to remember a specific timeline for this story. I'm still surprised by how ya decided to have 'em meet, though...definitely wasn't expecting that... Keep up the awesome work, sugar!
~Cyn

@colorguardislife
That's always the question of the hour, isn't it? Hell, that's the very reason I don't stick to any particular schedule when updating my own works...I don't wanna be mid-chapter and have to force myself to stay awake, especially if my insomnia's been acting up horribly for days on end, because I've gotta meet a deadline. I'd rather just update whenever inspiration allows...keeps me from getting burnt out that way. But I already know I'm not like everyone else...I'm a freak in many ways, and I'm damned proud of it. *blasts Freak like Me by Halestorm through my ear buds*
~Cyn

@CynysterLove
I can say that I was going to write a bit more but started falling asleep. So there was originally more planned for that chapter. I wonder what else could have happened?

Well, damn...can't say I say that coming, even from a country mile away. *whistles in awe* Now I'm really wishing I'd waited a couple days to read this...the suspense and anticipation are gonna kill me for the next week!
~Cyn

@colorguardislife
That, they are, sugar. I can just see that one having the most probability, considering that Jake and Jinxx seem to be the most level-headed and sensible outta the entire band... Then again, maybe I'm wrong and it'll be the other way around, or some other cross-meeting...who knows, besides you? LOL!
~Cyn

@CynysterLove
Hahaha the possibilities are endless. I'm brainstorming how to best go about this. XD

Hmm... I have a vision of Ashley and CC being out hunting or something--once Jake and CC get outta that cave, anyway--and end up shooting each other or something. Then Jake and Jinxx have to go save their sorry behinds, which ends up uniting both groups into one. I could be wrong, though, but considering the circumstances thus far, I could see it happening... Keep up the awesome work, sugar!
~Cyn

@Andysgirlfriendbvb
If you read the first two or three chapters of my story Son's of Night you'll know where Andy is. :) He won't be in this story for a while longer still.

So jake and Ashley are now together. Jinxx and cc are together and fuck knows where Andy is. Please bring him in soon I love him ❤❤

@colorguardislife
Why could I see it being Ashley and CC stumbling across one another, then uniting their groups? Besides, I thought I remembered something about Ashley being the leader of the Sons of Night till Andy came along in Sons of Night...or maybe my memory's flawed... *shrugs* Oh, well...your story, you'll figure it out...
~Cyn