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Chapter 94: please, please let this work! I'm rooting for these three so hard right now!
(and my co-workers are looking at me like I'm insane. That's ok, They Don't Need to Understand...)
@Merelan
man, i haven't read those in so long, i'll have to catch up to see what you're referencing. when i edit i don't mess with the original notes, and i started this story well over a year ago.
though i know who you're talking about that made me feel shitty, as i'm a champion grudge-holder. i admit a huge portion of my vernacular slang came from beavis & butthead, bill & ted's excellent adventure/bogus journey, & wayne's world.
@anathema
Pithy, Chapter-by-chapter commentary in my comment below, for your amusement. I'm gathering them all in one place, for ease of reference, and so I don't lose my place again.
@Merelan
haha! i bet a lot of 10th graders would have gotten some serious jollies from something so randy as this! i am in the act of editing this as i post it to my wattpad, so the beginning should read a little more smoothly than the early-middle.
Chapter 14 note: I wish to Hell I could have read "Succubus" instead of the Scottish Play for 10th grade honors English.
Chapter 19 Note: (to the person/persons who mocked anathema) Honey, if you think watching videos of Andy for research purposes is weird, imagine how much fucking stalking goes into getting any kind of bead on JINXX. Jesus Christ!
Chapter 66: And the worst thing I got called in high school was "retarded" because I dared to like Winger after Beavis and Butthead made fun of them.
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@Merelan
i know, right? :OD
2/12/17