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Kissing the Concrete - Comments, page 4

Aye, I love the story!

anathema anathema
6/28/15

No no no no he can't die she needs him and he needs here they were perfect together:( by the way good chapter it was deep but beutiful at the same time xxx

CRAZY_CAT!! CRAZY_CAT!!
6/28/15

NO he cant die!!! they were so happy together :(

I'm going insane!!! Update please!!! BTW ur a really good writer. :)

Jazzy JJ Jazzy JJ
6/27/15

The dying experience in chapter 46 is beautifully written, I love it <3
Seeing an alert when you've added a chapter makes me happy, Have an awesome break!

If you're not keen on it, don't do it, dude. If you wanted to for your own reasons, than I'm sure you could edit the rating. Smut is not a requirement for a good story by any means, clearly.

anathema anathema
6/25/15

I love it! Thanks for updating!

I'm assuming Nix has landed the first strike.

LostInTheMusic LostInTheMusic
6/24/15

Awesome. :)

anathema anathema
6/23/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

OMG!!!!! I LUV THIS STORY!!!PLEASE UPDATE !!

Fable_Lynn Fable_Lynn
6/22/15

holy shit some one should come in and do some ninja shit on jimmy to save andy and iris!

Yinbvbforever Yinbvbforever
6/22/15

@Yinbvbforever
That is the point. I actually discovered really late that I had accidentally put "Thriller" as a genre, and decided to add these types of chapters :)

er meh gerd i dont know what to say but chapter 35 and 34 are just so adrenalin fillings! :3

Yinbvbforever Yinbvbforever
6/21/15

@Thorns and Petals
yeah dude, totally. you write well. but definitely write for yourself. regardless of whether it's fanfiction or pieces you're showing at a gallery or corporate art, it's going to be better and it's going to be stronger if you are true to your vision and follow your heart. don't pander to whatever you might think other people want when it comes to making art unless that's your sole means of making a living. dig? ;)

anathema anathema
6/21/15