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@ItsAllDoneForYou
i can understand, dude. just got out of vet school fairly recently myself. good writin' is good writin'! don't forget about us, though! we'll be waiting and stuffs. :)
@anathema
Awh, thank you! I'm definitely still here! I started school last week and it's my senior year so I haven't had a lot of time to post up a chapter. I've actually written about 37 chapters of this story already and ALL of the elements play a really important part in things that happen later on. So, there is a reason they didn't use a condom. There is a reason Haley sick. There is a reason Allison died and I'm really glad that you can see that ;)
I just came to beg you to update, and saw you had this really low rating- what on earth? Someone in particular must have not liked one element a lot. Don't let it get to you. I think your writing is superb. I know it irritates me every time I read a story where they don't use protection unless they specify the chick's on the pill and have a conversation, but frankly, this is fan fiction, and soi feel like it all depends on the context. In the case of this story, it fit the context pretty well and your writing is superior. If they did it continually without a rubber and then were surprised when she got pregnant, or if she gets pregnant just now, and they're surprised, I'd get irritated, but I don't think you'd write that, because you're a smart cookie. So people need to get over themselves. this story is awesome. Come back!
@thatscalledyes
Mine too! We actually have a collaboration called Far And Away! And just wait because everything about how fast it's going will be explained in like the sixth chapter or so :)
@ItsAllDoneForYou
BrokenWing is actually one of my good friends on here haha I love her stuff. But I will definitely check out the other one as well! And I'm glad I could make your day! I know I like getting long comments as well so I try to do the same for others. Keep going with this, I'm really interested to see where it goes! My only advice would be to just slow down the plot development a little cause I feel like Elsie and Andy kinda went too fast into their relationship but otherwise, I love it and I'm interested to see what happens. Also noticed you're a dancer on your profile. Surprise! Me too! It's actually my college major (well, one of them haha I also am involved in theater, writing and arts/artist management) But anyway, I'll stop blabbing. Can't wait for another update! And take your time. I understand you get busy cause I definitely do too and I lose a lot of readers because of it... But just know I'm waiting eagerly for your next update!
@thatscalledyes
Of course I will!!! If you're looking for other good stories, go check out @Gone_Girl and @BrokenWing both are amazing authors! Thank you so much for the long comment, that's what makes my day :S
THIS. This is what I've been looking for. I've only gotten through the first chapter but I'm already enjoying it. Original idea, none of that adoption bullshit, already solid characters, good layout, good grammar and punctuation. Thank you for existing omg. I've been trying to find a decent fic to read and I'm very picky about fics and I must say, this is something I can get into. Well done so far and I plan on continuing with this story. Consider me another subscriber. And if you have time, check some of my stuff out if you want. I'm not saying you have to but I know I personally always try to read my reader's work as well if they have any
THIS. This is what I've been looking for. I've only gotten through the first chapter but I'm already enjoying it. Original idea, none of that adoption bullshit, already solid characters, good layout, good grammar and punctuation. Thank you for existing omg. I've been trying to find a decent fic to read and I'm very picky about fics and I must say, this is something I can get into. Well done so far and I plan on continuing with this story. Consider me another subscriber. And if you have time, check some of my stuff out if you want. I'm not saying you have to but I know I personally always try to read my reader's work as well if they have any
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