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If Hell were any Closer - Comments

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I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

I love the story! you're right it is awkward...

BVB_fallenangels02 BVB_fallenangels02
4/4/16

Whoa dude. Chapter 20 has some casual racism, though you may not have realized/intended it.

nikki is turning out to be kind of pathetic. She's always tsaying her relationship is doomed and she never puts any energy or effort into compromise or affecting any positive changes. Just making these broad, melodramatic statements instead of trying to heal and make progress. I know she's just a kid in high school but come on?

anathema anathema
3/30/16

Hmm, in chapter 14 she could always just choose to be her own woman and be single. Though I'd probably go with Andy, but still, it's an option.

anathema anathema
3/30/16

I'm so confused, in chapter 8 it's oli, not Andy she's hugging?

anathema anathema
3/30/16

Keep writing. I love this story more than anything. Please update.

DezelGirl03 DezelGirl03
12/28/15

Wht happened to Alex? And with Andy? Did the CIA actually
lwave a message??? Is this all a dream of hers?!? I'm so confused!!
Ps. Loving the story, I think a 3rd would b awesome

Mfelix Mfelix
8/17/15

@Gone_Girl
Nooo it can't end. :(

@Gone_

Rebecca conroy Rebecca conroy
8/17/15

@Rebecca conroy
Nope :)
but almost!

Gone_Girl Gone_Girl
8/17/15

@Rebecca conroy
Nope :)
but almost!

Gone_Girl Gone_Girl
8/17/15

Is chapter 27 the last
chapter?

Rebecca conroy Rebecca conroy
8/17/15

I went to warped tour! XD sadly ALL of the bands i saw didnt do signings... xc but uit was great :)

shesablackhearteddiva shesablackhearteddiva
8/5/15

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuude

We Are The Black Veiled Brides We Are The Black Veiled Brides
8/4/15

love this cant wait for the next chapter

Babydontcut16 Babydontcut16
8/1/15

This was amazing. Talk about Nikki being a super badass

We Are The Black Veiled Brides We Are The Black Veiled Brides
7/27/15

Holy shit. That was really good haha

txke-me-dxncing txke-me-dxncing
7/27/15