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I don't know how it would work on a phone, but I figured out on my computer that I have to click the Enter key twice at the end of a paragraph to get it to space, because just indenting doesn't work on here.
@BlackIris
Im reading on my phone and there are no spaces between each of the paragraphs. It might justf be my phone
@BlackVeilFireGirl99
Thanks. I don't know what medium you're using to read my story, but on my computer it shows separate paragraphs. I don't indent as it takes forever to do and doesn't always read. This site doesn't always like to allow me to edit and upload the way I would in any other scenario.
This is a good story but you need to put spaces between the paragraphs otherwise its really hard to read as its just a giant block of text other then that I love the story. Its certainly and interesting read.
@Red Phoenix77
Haha me too :) and what I meant about Ash as a dad is that I don't he doesn't like kids or anything like that. It just seems like in real life kids aren't something he would consider having. I have seen pictures of him with kid fans and having fun, but apparently he is the guy who, if you're sick, doesn't know what to do. (This I've heard from people who've known him at some point in time.)
I dunno, I can actually see him being a pretty decent dad. I get the feeling that he'd probably be one of the "fun" dads, playing silly games with the kid and spoiling them rotten. And if you think about it, spending time with a baby, or even a toddler, probably wouldn't be a whole lot different than being crammed into a tour bus with the rest of the band, considering some of the tour stories they've told. Glad to see you back, I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next. ( Truthfully, I'm still a bit curious to know who the big mouth was that told Psycho-Boy about the munchkin. )
@Red Phoenix77
I keep meaning to update but Mum life has recently gotten so busy! XP I got a second job and am in school but have been working on the next chapter and then some! I have something in the works don’t worry! And thank you I appreciate the comment :)
Just wondering about the possibility of an update in the not - terribly - distant future . This is one of the more interesting stories I've found on here , and I'm curious to see how it comes out . Thanx !
@Red Phoenix77
Yeah seriously you're telling me XP the most we can do is be supportive and report the people harassing on social media if we can see it.
After hearing about all the trouble he had with that whackadoodle on the internet , it's pretty easy to understand why he tries to keep his family out of the spotlight , and apparently that wasn't entirely successful . Some people are apparently either stupid or malicious enough to think that they have the right to harass or denigrate people just because they are related to someone famous , which is completely ridiculous ! I know Andy's folks have had to deal with that , too , so why can't these people just grow the hell up and actually get a life ?
this was the first story i read when i found this webcite and its such a great story i cant wait for u to update again
@Red Phoenix77
I write it out on Microsoft word and then copy and paste. Usually if I type it out directly it lags and refuses to let me edit it. When I write it out and copy and past, it shows paragraph breaks. Maybe it reads differently on other computers or something, but I have always been able to distinguish the paragraphs with my computer.
11/12/18