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1: at first I was like no then once they both agreed and Andy gave his agreement and what he said. I thought okay yes I believe this is right.
2: absolutely not I believe in your story shit is gonna go do and I have a bad feeling about him.
I'm kinda torn about my answer for #1... Then again, my mother, as much as I often hate her, did raise me not to have even a single kid unless I knew I could support it on my own, should a time arise that I had no choice but to do just that.
As for #2...it's your story, and something tells me that, even with reader input, you'll still make the ultimate decision yourself. Then again, maybe not... I guess we'll just have to wait and find out...
~Cyn
There was only one part of this chapter that I couldn't read unless I wanna be crying hysterically for the next hour, and no, it's not because of your writing... This chapter was actually really good and believe me, I understand being busy. Just be glad you're not DM'ing a play party for a bunch of kinksters the week before Halloween, but that's neither here, nor there. Keep up the great work whenever you've got the time, sugar!
~Cyn
1. Not really but I don't ship him with the character you made Juliet into either.
2. I don't know why I don't they just don't really click for me
3. Total bitch alert haha
Please update, this is reeeeallly good
question 1: hell yes
question 2: there perfect for each other, and with evangeline just makes them look and sound even more perfect
question 3: burn it. burn it with fire.... and let satan him self bring her back to hell ...
this story is really good !!!
I do ship Andy and Ariel. The thought of them being a proper family is cute. But Andy and Juilet area good together and it would be sad if they broke it off. As for sheila. She seems nice but I'm worried she may cause trouble for Andy and Juliet btw I love this story. Keep it up
@My Own Rebel Love Song
Well, I'm also the ex-stepdaughter of someone who, by all accounts, treated me like I was their own...till my younger half-brother was born. Then I was figuratively the redheaded stepchild in the corner. By all accounts, especially my mother's, I was told he forced her to act like I wasn't part of the family just because I didn't share his blood. Maybe I'm a bit jaded because of that, but still...I wanna knock the shit outta this particular Juliet all the same.
Yeah, I get the whole disappointment angle you're working at, but then again, along with being jaded like I am, I'm of the mindset where I'd be thankful to have her around...especially if it turned out I couldn't have kids of my own. Yeah, she'd take up time and attention from my partner, but so what? As long as he still loved me at the end of the day, I could deal with it.
~Cyn
@CynysterLove
I understand what you mean completely! But I tried to look at how someone would feel if their boyfriend/or girlfriend suddenly had a child enter their life that was very unexpected but it was their biological daughter or son. Especially from a partner who really loves someone and wanted to have children with their partner, their very first child together, I thought that partner would feel kind of disappointed of that. Although Juliet acts very jealous of Ariel and Evangeline, I try to think of how she would feel if that really happened or how someone would react in real life in this situation. But Juliet is more jealous of the fact that Evangeline is not her daughter and never will be and Andy has a bond with his daughter that belongs to another woman. But I completely understand where you're coming from because I would feel the exact same way with my own child.
Aside from Juliet's constant jealousy of Evangeline and the relationship she's obviously gonna have with Andy now that they've met, this is a pretty good story. But because of her jealousy...I just wanna knock this version of Juliet into the second Tuesday of next week...but maybe that's just because I'd leave anyone who tried to make me choose them before my child, or seemed even remotely jealous of them... *shrugs*
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1. Maybe. Probably.
2. Andy probably will gave his agreement and all that jazz.
3. Yes.
4. .......
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