I've Given You My Heart To Break.. - Comments, page 3

@Bondanella I don't know yet if I'll have time for writing on another site, but I'll check it out :)

@anathema
"Ça fait 20 ans" is good. Like my English teacher keeps on saying "the more you practice, the better will be" if you want you can. Btw, are you feeling better?

@I am your Shadow..
Haha! Peut etre! Umm.. Ca fait 20 ans? That doesn't sound right. ;) I mean I am WAY out of practice.

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@anathema
I love you too! <3 and your grammar wasn't half bad! You should practice more, because even a long time after you're still better than some people I know (not bashing them) it was totally normal! Il faut ecrire plus souvent :)

@Ellie-phant
Awww thanks <3 :D

I can handle no smut, this story is so good, it doesn't even need it..

@I am your Shadow..
Je t'aime! <3 Quand j'etais tres jeune, je pouvais parler et ecrire en Francais. Mais, maintenant, pas du tout! Haha! See, just that took me like, 7 minutes, and my grammar was probably horrific! ;)

@Love_everything
You're not hating him yet... :evilsmirk:

@anathema
I honestly don't think it's about good/bad punctuation/grammar. But mosty on English/American/French own styles of writing dialog. I don't know which one you are, but I'm French personally and I don't really know how you use " or - for you. For me, " is for opening and ending the dialogue, everything said in between and different persons talking is - but I guess for you it's different, sorry if it confused you but that's what I've always learned ^^ And thank you <3

@I am your Shadow..
i sure hope so! fyi: sometimes it confuses me when you use - instead of " not that my punctuation/grammar is perfect, hahaha! ;) i love your story: Angie may be addicted to Andy, but i'm addicted to your story!

I HATE ANDY! Ugh he is so.... IGNORANT! Matt seems awesome tho!

@Isometimeswrite
@anathema
Don't worry guys you'll know what happens next.. the odds are really slim.. But who knows? There will be happiness.. Sooner or later.

Same, I also wish for happiness, but it's looking like the odds are slim. Uh oh!

Oh my... It feels like I NEED to know what happens next!
Cant help but wish for a happy ending, but loving the tragedic theme until now!

Dayum!!! this story is freaking awesome!!!

Whoa! *herniates brain out foramen magnum from intensity*

@Ellie-phant
Breath! Breath! Breath! Don't leave us Ellie! <3

Oh god OH god oh god!

I'm getting nervous!

Oh man! :(

@Ellie-phant
Oh nooooooo :'( :'( :'(

@Love_everything
No, you're not hating Andy yet.. Oops I said too much.

@andybabeaf
Yes! What the fuck Andy? Why did you do that?!

@anathema
Sorry.. But.. It's not over yet.. :)