The Overprotective One - Comments, page 4

@VenomReckless
No not the scene girl XP the picture for Nyx Biersack? That one is meh.

@fallen rebel_BVB
Yesss!!!

Maybe at the party some guy could try to have sex with nyx and Ashley shows up and kicks dat guys ass. Just an idea. ;) btw I love the story so far!!! :) ;) :D

That girl up there is not you...i searched emo girls with black and blonde hair it came up with 2 pics of that girl...

Loving this story so far! And I would offer you the direction/character ideas that you are asking for... however I am by far the most uncreative person on the planet so I really can't come up with any ideas... and the sorta, half way to being full, ideas I do come up with suck. Sorry :\

Okay so the next ones will be short sorry.

hehe yayyyy!!!!!!

@Immortalitysuitsyou

@ashleys.purdy.girl
Glad you like it. There should be about two more updates tonight. I will try and write about 6 to 8 tomorrow.

oops AWESOME

its AESOME!!!!!!

Please continue! :3