The Overprotective One - Comments, page 2

NO!!! Please continue the story, don't let haters get in the way, and think about all the people who would be upset if you stopped.

fuck all the hate this story is amazing please don't stop, you clearly have amazing supporters who really want you to stay so please keep writing! im in love with this story as is so many others, remember haters are gonna hate its what they do but don't give them the power to bring you down okay? please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, ok listen, yea people are gonna say shit, hell there's these fuckers on this sight saying shit about bvb and the army, but where are they going in life? Oh yes, there going to hell, don't let the world bring you down.

Please keep writing this is a really awesome story!!!!!!!!!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T LISTEN TO THE HATERS!!!!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! !!!

@Immortalitysuitsyou
Don't quit writing you're grest and I will not let you quit i am in love with this story!

NoooOOOpe plz no quits plz you aw3som3 so de st0ry

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!

@Immortalitysuitsyou
NONONONONONO I NO HIGH IM JUST VERY IN NEED OF A SLURPE AND I CAN'T GET 11111 ANDLEY IS REAL

@xXHARLEY_QUINNXx
YUP PRETTY SURE YOURE HIGH ON SORMTHIG THATS NOT LEGAL

@Immortalitysuitsyou
FLUFFESMUTT PEANUT BUTTER BICTHES GET WRECKED WHO WON WHO'S NEXT YOU DECIDE

@xXHARLEY_QUINNXx
OKAY DO YOU WANT FLUFF OR SMUT?? YOU CHOSE CAUSE I SUCK AT DESICIONS

@Immortalitysuitsy I HAVE THE PICTURE IMMA TWEET IT I IS @Rabbit_Morgan AND SURE GO AHEAD BUT IMMA WORN YOU WILL FREACK ZE FLICK OUT AND YES I MIGHT NOT BE HIGH I STILL DON'T KNOW!!!GO AHEAD THE I WOULD SAY ALL THE SHIP NAMEZ ANDLEY!!

@xXHARLEY_QUINNXx
Cx ohmigawd
Jw are you high? Jk
WANT ME TO MAKE AN ANDLEY FANFIC CAUSE I WILL IF YOU WANT

@Immortalitysuitsyou
It's boring there just ppl are normal and I'm werid so EVERYONE THE IS A SETTING A WASHING MACHINE also ANDLEY IS REAL I HAVE A PICTURE ON MY IPOD I WILL POST IT EVERYWHERE and I AM PURPLE NOT BLUE

@xXHARLEY_QUINNXx
What do you mean? Cx
I'm not really a Starbucks person myself. I am a major Rockstar addict. ; - ; but Ashley posts his Starbucks on Instagram a lot so I figured to put it in dere.

Starbucks is not fun

I'm not good at suggesting stuff, I usually start of with a character and see where it goes xD I do love vampires(the beautiful kind :P but it's really hard to write a good story that doesn't get to cliche or "predictable" when you have vampires in it, if you don't like stuff like that you can always try to write a story about someone who meets one of the band members in a random city or village. But DO NOT make them meet at a concert or backstage if you want something unique. That's about what I can give you, it not much but do what you think feels best, then you get the best outcome. I'm looking forward to reading the upcoming story :)

@EmotionalAngel
Thank ou so much I really enjoyed reading your comment. It made my day. :) I am glad you like the story. I am considering starting a new one then updating both of them once a day. Do you hav any suggestions for the new story or for this one? I would love to hear your feedback.

You get way to little feedback on this story, it's awesome, and you are really good at capturing the reader when you write, you should be proud of yourself ;)