Story Of The Wild Ones - Comments, page 3

I actually loves the new Alex! You wrote the whole seen perfectly! Poor jake lol! It was a perfect way to start a new sequel! They changed and that's great!

Don't be sorry, it just shows the intimacy between your characters and it appeals to your audiences sense of pathos. It plays on emotions and that's what makes an even better story. I love her new boldness! I think it's good that means she's not living in the past and it really helps build character. Can't wait for more!

Haha, fucking love this! I woke up my parents by laughing so hard!! can't wait for the next update!!