Fallen Angel - Comments - Black Veil Brides Fanfiction

omg update soon please!

Yinbvbforever
3/1/15

Just started this, it's really good I look forward to the next chapter :)

foreverawildone
1/16/15

your killing me with these cliff hangers!

Kayla_Ash
1/15/15

Why A Cliff Hagger!!

Yinbvbforever
12/28/14

Why A Cliff Hagger!!

Yinbvbforever
12/28/14

Update please!!!!!!!!!!!!

Andy B. IS HOT
12/28/14

Iupdate lease

Ruth
12/1/14

@AngelicaMystique
Hurry pweaze -cute little kitten face-

AP Luver
8/1/14

@AP Luver @SammiDolll sorry it's taking so long~ i promise I have been working on it this time. It's just that this one is going to be long. I hope when it's finally updated it will be worth it. :)
In the meantime, because ya'll have commented since my last update, here's a little snip of the next chapter ;)

I screamed and grabbed the pillow behind me. “PERVERT!!! GET AWAY!” I swung the pillow repeatedly. “WHERE ARE MY CLOTHES? WHY AM I NOT AT HOME? WHAT DID YOU DO?” I shot questions at him rapid-fire as I continued to beat him with a pillow.
“Well if you chill out I’ll explain—
I froze, pillow still cocked back behind me. “One does not simply clam down under these circumstances!!” I took another swing, but this time he yanked the pillow away from me.
“No. No more pillow for you.” He shook a finger at me like a parent to a child before sending me a crooked smile.
My mouth dropped; I felt so insulted. For a short instant, the kind smile out me at ease, but then I remembered the predicament I was in and disgust dominated over the slight attraction once more. I took the other pillow that was behind me and tried again. Taking the bait, he grabbed the pillow, and I made a run for it. He caught me by the arm, and I was swung back around.
“Hey wait!”
“No—!”
We tussled for a moment, before tripping and falling back on the bed. He rolled over above me and pinned my hands on each side of my face. “God dammit, woman, calm down! I didn’t do anything! You hit your head last night and got knocked out!”